Critiques

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-10-08 11:20

Dear Leonie,
Curdos for your idea and composition. It's your creative sight that has produced this excellent picture.

Little distraction that I have removed in the WS is only to accentuate your idea.

Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-10-08 11:01

Dear Hasan,
Splendid! I must say.
The story in the composition has aptly documented the hardship of those mountain people
and the contrast with a trekker at a distance is your unique creation.

it's the same load on the back:
Pleasure for one
and livelihood for other.

Bravo!!!
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-10-08 7:28

Dear Ali,
A pleasant composition.
The spikes of the dry grass in the foreground,
the transparent water showing the rocks underneath,
and the rocky humps in the backdrop,
everything is very attractive and pleasing.

Only one suggestion: Inclusion of a little sky in the frame could have played better. Only a little low camera angle!

Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-10-02 8:34

Dear Alex,
Apt. choice of object and an excellent colour saturation level that has made the picture extraordinary.
Something really drove me to do a WS that I have explained. That is only my own idea of composition.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-09-18 5:46

Dear Colin,
Just unbelievable! The colour of the green plants establishes the reality in a dreamy environment.
Nature has its many faces.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-09-17 10:47

Dear Claude,
An attractive and elegant capture of a vertical structure and not a single grammatical error within it.
Congratulation and encore.
I have just tried a variation in the workshop as I suggested a little glow from the dark background. Hope you like it.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-09-15 6:23

Dear Risabh,
Excellent frame you have done. Exposure uniformity is an inherent problem with such type of situation.
I have tried a workshop for that.
Hope you like it.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-09-14 11:15

Dear Teodora,
A rich thought. A tender feeling. A soft and dreamy colour.
An opposite stream creativity from a dreamer.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-09-02 12:00

Dear Ambar,
The rich Green on the foreground is attractive. Extra sharpness is little uncomfortable. The washed out background attracted me for a workshop. Please check and reply.
Extensively researced and informative note. Carry on and relish.

Best wishes.
Dr. J.

bhuniatrekearth (764) 2007-07-15 10:31

Something interesting and very attractive.
Dear David,
What I noticed:
The contour of the leg is perfect anatomy of a normal leg.
The colour of the drinks is highly provocative for a sip. To titrate a perfect colour saturation we mostly use the skin-tone as a marker and here in this picture the beer-tone is the bench mark.

An enjoyable picture and information.

Best wishes.
Dr. J.