Critiques

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 11:12

Hi Jose Luis,
It is nice to see an old tram still in use, even if just for touristic purposes or to amke fun for children.
I especially like the red metal structures seen here. The position of the one right above the tram gives a surreal impression of a flying yellow tram :)
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 11:07

Hi Gabriele,
I like your point of view here. The view from the top is really impressive and tree to the left is well utilized as a frame. I also think you've chosen a right position for your shot as it the tree is well adjusted to the curved line of river bank.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 11:01

Hi Ana,
In spite of the many tpurists you mentioned, this looks as a tranquil place frozen in the time, and that impression is additionally enhanced by the slightly misty sky. The composition is well balanced, and rocks of a different shape add dynamics to the scene.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 10:49

Hi Andrew,
A well captured moment in the everyday life of a big city, with the newlywed couple enjoying their intimate moment surrounded by people passing by and tall office buildings.
Although the leaves in the corners are blurred, which is usually not a nice detail, but here it gives an impression of observing the scene through a frame.
Regards,
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 10:36

Hi Oleg,
Such a pretty church, guarded by these tall, green trees. This place looks so tranquil and idyllic. It is also interesting to note a difference in colour of two roofs.
I only have some doubts about the frame you chose as I'm feeling its layout is taking some attention from the presented scene.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 10:30

Hi Gildas,
This is a slightly different approach than your usual countryide photos, but it works really well. The composition is simple and clean, yet it offers plenty elements to observe. I especially like a detail of the stairs which line is enriching the strict geommetric structure of the windows and door. The sun-lit orange facade adds touch of warmth.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-18 10:25

Hi Valeria,
I was instantly drawn to the colours here which are so rich. They remind me of a painting, especially the blue in the sky. It's pity we can't see top of the tower, and perhaps a bit of sharpening could be useful here, but I know that depends on personal taste.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-01 8:15

Hi Roland,
Well captured daily life view. You turned one, not very attractive scene, into a real stage with actors that are completely unaware of their secondary roles :)
Good depth of field, thanks to the floor with such strong reflections that appears almost like water surface. It is interesting to note that, except for few colourful spots, the photo looks as B&W.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-01 8:08

Hi Ayan,
Interesting daily life scene and it is to be well appreciated that the women are fully involved in their work, which resulted in this spontaneous photo.
The blurred object in the center of your shot should not be welcome in other circumstances, but here it works well illustrating speed of their movements.
Vedrana

vedra (0) 2008-03-01 8:00

Hi Benjamin,
This child has such a beautiful bright eyes, and she looks both shy and curious in the same time. If the eyes are the mirror of the soul, this photo is certainly proving it.
Interesting notes, too.
Vedrana