Photographer’s Note
These women were returning home from market at the end of the day, near Ndu, Northwest Province.
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SamB
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(1948) 2006-09-05 15:55
i like the idea on this one, but the composition doesn't work for me very well. Maybe it would have been a little bit better to have taken the picture from a little bit farther right, putting the nearest woman farther to the left (maybe halfway to two thirds of the way farther left than she is now), and showing us more of the crowd. That way the narrow DOF would have greater impact. Currently the left side of the picture feels kind of wasted.
Thanks!
sam
Photo Information
- Copyright: Doug Chaffee (DougC) (47)
- Genre: Gens
- Medium: Couleur
- Date Taken: 2006-05-10
- Categories: Vie quotidienne
- Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon 70-300mm IS USM
- Exposition: f/5.0, 1/50 secondes
- More Photo Info: view
- Versions: version originale
- Date Submitted: 2006-09-05 15:23
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