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• barrufeto_77 (21104)
• [2007-09-06 0:48]

Witaj J.

Excellent picture with the focus on the man in the middle.

Well done!

Rgs, Oscar

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• luisafonso (13460)
• [2007-09-06 0:52]

I like the colors here, a bit faded by the way... The greens/reds vs the creamy whites really make a great impact on the frame. The main subject - at least for me he is the main subject - is a bit too centered here (complemented with that 31 on the top of his head asking for attention) but that's not bad at all. Love the soft bokeh on the back. Like it.

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• ninaL (16477)
• [2007-09-06 0:55]

Witaj.
Robia to zdjecie spojrzenia i gesty rak...
Ale za biale powinnam Ci obnizyc note ;).
No bo o ile ten dach kolorowy (chyba to to) + swiatlo sztuczne wplywaja tutaj korzystnie na temperature twarzy, to calosc jest jednak zapaproszona, mniej czytelna, mniej wyrazista, mniej dynamiczna bez te zafarbowanie fartuchow...
Chyba znowoz wezme sie za robote, zawsze to latwiej na cudzym zdjeciu byc madrym, niz na swoim ;).
Pozdr. G.

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• jasmis (40195)
• [2007-09-06 1:05]

Nooo, a tu m i się podoba operacja głębią. Ciekawa scenka, ruchliwe, kolorowe miejsce.
Pozdrawiam!

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• s10001in (1456)
• [2007-09-06 1:07]
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Very weak Photo J. !!!!
:(

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• riclopes (29014)
• [2007-09-06 4:01]

hahaha, the best critic is already written, before me, Jerzy ;-) Another great one of this attractive place. The atmosphere makes one to wish to shoot all the time in every directions - a pitty that people don't make it easy, but you managed very well. Love the detail of the oof cell phone at right. I still like what you did with the colors.
Ricardo

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• Furachan (0)
• [2007-09-06 4:45]

It's not bad, J but it lascks that CENTRAl element that draws the eye - this is too much a "background" affair, it is you sketching with your lens, whereas yesterday you were pinpointing and stabbing exactly in the right way. So one greenie for atmosphere, which is pungent and "there" and one withheld for what is lacking...
bw,
Francis

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• SamB (1948)
• [2007-09-06 20:31]

Hello, Jerzy--
Tend to fall in line with Francis on this one... that this one is more of a sketch without much of an apparent objective, whereas yesterday's post was a spot-on stab in the right direction. The atmosphere is good here, and the man in foreground bokeh at right adds an interesting element, but everything seems disjointed... but not in a way that really even conveys disjointedness. Great atmosphere, but lacking thrust...
Thanks!
sam

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• polter (4375)
• [2007-09-07 5:58]

Podoba mi sie ta scena - lobię takie zamieszanie w kadrze, jeśli wzrok sie w końcu zawsze w jednym punkcie zatrzymuje, ale przedtem dużo pobiega po szczegółach. Fajna głębia ostrości. Uroku dodają te fikuśne metalowe wieszaki (?). No i kolorystyka fantastyczna, świetlista. I tu do jakoś niebiała biel mi odpowiada. Pozdrawiam serdecznie T.