Hunter

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• ninaL (16477)
• [2007-09-08 1:02]
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To jest niezle...
Trzeba sie przypatrzyc lekko, aby zrozumiec i docenic...
Te sylwetki dobrze sie tutaj komponuja z "dwoma wejsciami".
No a te ciuciu co tam pomiedzy nimi jest slicznie oswietlone.
Pozdr. G.

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• jhm (69967)
• [2007-09-08 1:10]

Hello Jerzy,

You play very well with light in background, this care for a excellent composition.
The man in foreground enjoy of the good fruits, colours and position of the man on the picture are very well.
Thanks for sharing.

Have a nic eweekend,
John.

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• ben4321 (9335)
• [2007-09-08 1:29]

Very meaty image Jerzy, both in terms of colour and content, with those sausages in the background.
I like how you framed him with the two guys on either side, producing a tightly framed and quite claustrophobic composition that works well.
It's a bit of a shame that the sausages in the background are more in-focus than your main subject, but never mind.

Cheers,
Ben

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• Furachan (0)
• [2007-09-08 3:06]
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I really like the SCENE, J, and I'm rooting for you brother to come up with a definitive, defining shot like the first in the series, but you're sill searching for your voice here, man. I like very much, and see potential in the right side of the frame, the fuzzy figure of the man entering the frame - that is very good indeed but it is somehow lost in the complexity of the rest. Focus n the fod, eh? Maybe...

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• jasmis (40195)
• [2007-09-08 5:10]

Ta seria się ładnie rozwija. Jest tu widoczny bazarowy tumult, bo tylko tak tłumaczę gęstość kadru.
Pozdrawiam!

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• john_c (24624)
• [2007-09-08 9:13]

Hi Jerzy,
There is something diabolical in this scene, perhaps best represented by the theme of your note. There is both a hunted and haunted look evidenced by the two men whose visages are clearly seen. The man eating reminds us of an animal quickly downing his food to survive, while the fellow behind is sizing up where his own meal is to come from. Yet in the background there seems to be such a vast cornucopia of delights that one would expect a laid back relaxed atmosphere to prevail. A moving shot that at first I was inclined to pass over, but now have viewed with a slight shudder...Cheers.
John

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• s10001in (1456)
• [2007-09-08 20:01]

I know you will not agree with me..

But really..This is no way near J's work..
Gomen..Imean Sorry!!

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• kensimage (7930)
• [2007-09-09 8:27]

Aah, the hunters of Morocco. After visiting there I remember deciding the national motto should be "Carpet Diem", meaning "sieze the opportunity to sell carpets." The man in the middle definitely looks like a hunter, his eyes full of intensity as he lies in wait, surrounded by orange that almost suggests flames. I do think, though, that the focus needs to be on him--the food can make do with a bit of blur, and I think the man on the left could be cropped as well. But this one still succeeds anyway, it tells me its story loudly and clearly. Regards, Ken.

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• coco (23767)
• [2007-09-10 0:09]

Witaj Jerzy.

Even with the noise this photo looks superb. You look close him when really you are far. But the photo show us is this amazing and unique moment.
The composition, exposure and moment are grat.

Well done.

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• luisafonso (13460)
• [2007-09-10 1:18]

Uh, don't really know how to connect the note with the picture... This photo is about food. At least that what's in focus here. I like the glitter and the tasty atmosphere. But the people don't help this one that much...