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Women of the desert


Women of the desert
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Lara Francoli (acrossthelines) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 2 N: 4] (176)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2007-11-08
Catégories: Vie quotidienne
Exposition: f/4.5, 1/1000 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Date de soumission: 2008-06-15 3:45
Vue: 499
Points: 3
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
by the way of the Dakar we find this little village with all the women working hard under the sun with their children.
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Hi, Lara, I very much like your subject matter. I think distance from the woman causes the ground, buildings, and tree to compete with them as the subject. Take a look at my workshop edit, and let me know what you think. Of course, this picture suffers greatly from resolution degradation with my crop, but using the original would provide much better results, I am sure.

1) Crop to focus
2) Use Levels to control the blown out highlights and add more warmth and color range.
3) Use Brightness/Contrast layer along with a rectangular inverted center selection to vignette the edges, and further increas the focus on the women.

Slav Lara,
Qedraj pir rind e,mjara ku te hilbijartiye jî werê.Xwezla tîrêj jî di cî de bûna,wê wêneyek pir xweşik derketina holê.
i like composition.
TFS
Dûrzan

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