Bus in Nubian desert Photo

Photographer’s Note

It is road between Wadi Halfa and Khartoum.

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Paker (2636) 2005-03-15 13:29

Hi -
Good image.
However, if the bus was closer to us it would be more interesting to the viewer. Too much unecessary sand up front.
Did the bus brake?
regards,
Xtof

V3_Intruder (329) 2005-03-15 14:30

Nice picture!
Great composition, but everthing is just to centered. I also agree with Paker, for the sand in front. On my side, I think we could crop a part of the sky too. I made a workshop to show you theses changes, I hope you like it!

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hajle (1087) 2005-03-16 3:19