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Two Brothers


Two Brothers
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Copyright: RS Srinivasan (hello_ishan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 328 W: 14 N: 205] (1569)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2006-07-07
Catégories: Vie quotidienne
Exposition: f/3.2
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale
Date de soumission: 2006-07-18 7:46
Vue: 552
Points: 44
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
I met these two kids in a grocery shop where I went for some work. The kid on the left side is about 3-4 years old & was trying to attract the shop owner by shouting loudly for a chocolate. There were so many customers are there he pushed all of us & went between our legs to be the first to get the thing he wants. His elder brother(right side) was quite calm but he was with him. We all are laughing & at last he got the thing he wants. My friend who was with me & watching all these things happen told me to take a shot & post this on TE. When I was taking the shot the boy on the left coming towards me to see what I was doing? When I took the shot I showed this to his mother who was standing nearby & watching us & she was delighted to see their kids in my cell cam.

PP work- Adjusted contrst/brightness cropped & added frame.

evanrizo, Dragonheart, AiresSantos, delkoo, atus, stiginthedump, chanjits, goodwill, leo61, Photograph2u, prezntime, pablominto, gelor, robertosalguero, atilgone trouve(nt) cette note utile
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A Photograph2u: Thankshello_ishan 1 07-21 10:53
A goodwill: Small Picturehello_ishan 1 07-20 09:42
A arjun_das: Sharpnesshello_ishan 1 07-19 01:54
A stiginthedump: Back groundhello_ishan 1 07-19 01:25
A ndb1958: Thankshello_ishan 1 07-19 00:16
A anjan: Hihello_ishan 1 07-18 10:26
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Hello Srinivasan,
Excellent double portrait. I like how the kids are looking at the camera :-) Good framing.
Good work!
Best regards,
Vivek

Hi Srinivasan,
What expression in these faces. Good colors and sharpness. I like how you managed the light and the note.
Thanks and greetings,
Aires

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  • delkoo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4059 W: 239 N: 5380] (26479)
  • [2006-07-18 8:43]

hello srinivasan
interesting double portrait i like their expression of their cute faces.

well seen and well done

cheers didier

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  • anjan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 126 W: 0 N: 189] (1086)
  • [2006-07-18 8:47]
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Good framing, good picture for a mobile cam but shouldnt u move on Srinivasan? I was just looking at some of previous posts and found that most critiques praising u 4 ur efforts on mobilecam. This one i feel is just sort of ok, nothin 2 go ga ga about. I hope i didnt hurt ur felins, just some plain speakin. I am sure u can do a lot better.

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  • atus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2289 W: 209 N: 4494] (15053)
  • [2006-07-18 9:22]

Hello Srinivasan,
very nice and clear double portrait with very good dof and great and well visible background. Very well captured expressions full of surprise. TFS and best wishes!
Attila

The white balance is off here and there's a little too much over exposure in places for me to enjoy this photo. I've tried a workshop to try to undo these things, but couldn't do anything about the background which is a little distracting.
The note is good, but I'm not sure about the quality of the pic.

Thanks

Hi Srinivasan,
a beautiful doubleportrait of the little boys. I like their expressions, specially the right one.
Nice colours and good sharpness.
Good lightning.
Best wishes,
Nino

Nice shot dear the gestures on the faces of kids are so candid well composed nice note to explain the situation.

Nice expressions particularly of the boy in front. Perfect exposure. Did you increase the sharpness of the image? I am asking this as there is some noise in the image. TFS.

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4915 W: 138 N: 532] (45314)
  • [2006-07-20 3:12]

Hi Srinivasan,
very nice double portrait, interesting note, nice childrens. Good work. I like it.
TFS, Aleksander

Hi Srini
A very clear contrasted portrait of these two boys with light reflection in their eyes and a sharp fine detailled background. Pleasant to read the circumstances you took this shot in.
Henk

Hi Srinivasan,
You have made them super heroes. Moments of glory for the brothers. They are astonished and looking into the camera. Dear, why is the picture so small, trying to learn something new?
Regards,
Rajeev

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3762 W: 372 N: 7846] (34342)
  • [2006-07-20 12:46]

Hi Srinivasan!
Verry nice double portait.I love the expression at their faces and good sharpness in fore-and background.Nice natural colors.
Regards,leo

Hello Srinivasan, I am glad to see that you have a TE account and that I have discovered your work here :)

YOu did very well on the portraits of these 2 kids. Good expression on their faces my friend. Good close-up too. Take care, Yan :)

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  • zou Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 45 W: 26 N: 10] (221)
  • [2006-07-21 15:08]

Hello ishan :)
Amazing children sight, I like very much this kind of pictures
greeting to you

§
Zou

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  • osse Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 375 W: 0 N: 14] (2793)
  • [2006-07-24 6:05]

Hi Srinivasan
Nice portrait of this kids. Good colours, sharpnes and light.
Well done

osse

Hello Srinivasan.
Great job with a spur of the moment shot. The framing is excellent and the subjects expressions are really well cpatured.
Thanks for sharing,
Chris

Hi Srinivasan,
A pleasant double portrait, I love the way you capture their different expressions!
Well composed image, with a non-intrusive background to enhance the subjects...
Good use of lighting and well done!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Lovely faces, very good framed, great work my friend.Thanks a lot.

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  • gelor Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1018 W: 23 N: 353] (3166)
  • [2006-08-20 4:04]

Bonjour,
Très joli portrait de ces deux enfants. Netteté et éclairage sont superbes. Cette présentation carrée est également très agréable autant que le cadre. De l'excellent travail. Merci.
Gérard

merhaba dear srinivasan
very good portraits picture.lovely littly childs.very good light and composition.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hello Srinivasan. Thi is a very nice dual portrait of the two children looking intensely at the camera. Their eyes are very curious and their natural expressions add so much charm to the compo. Very well done and very amusing note to read. Thanks :-)

Roberto

Hi Srinivasan,

Very nicely composed. Excelent Potrait. I like your note/memory very much. Well donde.
Kind regards

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