SONG OF SONGS

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• bracasha75 (13706)
• [2008-06-13 11:10]

Hi JeanPaul
Beautiful song and beautiful optimistic message
TFS
Cheers,Braca

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• jasmis (39001)
• [2008-06-13 11:17]

Strange colours. Strange but beautiful. Superb note, as usual.
Regards my dear friend.

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• ManuMay (2001)
• [2008-06-13 11:24]

Jean Paul Poet!!!
Great view, absolute note. reat colours, great compo and for sure great theme.
Very well see and done.
Best Regards.
Manuel

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• Emile (16101)
• [2008-06-13 11:28]

Hola Jean Paul.
Excellent daily life shot in this beautiful park, your photo give us the opportunity to enjoy the moment with the people having a peaceful and relaxing day.
Your note is very good. Thank you.
Well done. TFS.
Wish you a nice weekend.

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• Jeppo (5641)
• [2008-06-13 11:46]

ciao Jp,

nice picture full of vivid colours.
good pov with pleasant depth

well done
Silvio

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• temmel (2474)
• [2008-06-13 11:58]

Dear Jean,
This is a fantastic shot with a lovely romantic atmosphere. The lighting and warm colors are dreamy.
Lovers are well composed in the background and i love the red dress of the woman,its so beautifuuuuuul:)
Love is in the air- i can smell it:)
Keep dreaming!!
Nanni for this beautiful poetic work!
puszi,Lin..

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• jonathan_hart (15522)
• [2008-06-13 12:44]

very well framed, the couple is at a strong point of the framing, strong composition, and wonderful quote of Aristotle,
regards
jo

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• faubry (28140)
• [2008-06-13 12:57]

ahhhhhhhh, enfin une photo, et quelle photo;...des couleurs, des personnes qui se promènent;;;et un superbe poême comme d'habitude;
à très bientôt
amitiés
francine

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• Gustaw (20552)
• [2008-06-13 13:20]

Hi, my friend!
It is very interesting photo. I like your oryginal composition. It is very nice view. I like your happy people. Good warm colours and light. Well done.
Marek

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• devimeuxbe (47369)
• [2008-06-13 13:48]

Hi Jean Paul
interesting scenery with the couple walking and the line of banks. Bucolic atmosphere
Well done
Bertrand

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• tomescuc (1211)
• [2008-06-13 16:17]

It has a quite romantic feeling, kind of Merchant Ivory stuff. Nice one.
cheers,
CT

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• avene (6190)
• [2008-06-13 16:32]

I wish there was an option to mark NOTE as my favourite :) fantastic poem, I particularly liked the line about scented oils in smiles, I think it's one of the most beautiful and one of the smartest expressions I've ever heard/read. and I absolutely love that you have chosen a simple scene (but cleverly composed, I like a lot the perspective created by the path) as an illustration to the poem, the calm beauty of the place is a great way to remind that the daily life when love matters most. superb work, my compliments. and yes, the photo goes to my favourites.

with kind regards,
Kristine

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• siamesa (5699)
• [2008-06-13 17:38]

Hi dear friend,
First, I loved this song a lot.Marvelous scene. Vivid colours as I like and a significant message.
All the best friend.
Abraços
Maria

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• lestans (12551)
• [2008-06-14 0:08]

HI dear friend!
thank you for your lovely notes!!
And for this picture: the couples walk keeping tenderly each other... but they don't sit down on these benches, looking not very clean!
Nice use of colors in the composition.
Cheers!

Livia

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• Royaldevon (3123)
• [2008-06-14 0:49]

Hello J.P.

The romance of this shot is just overpowering!
It is a little soft but in this instance, that works perfectly in its favour. Sharpness would destroy the mood!

It reminds me of a Victorian scene. Romance and love were infered, never rexplicit.

The colours, the composition, the people all combine divinely!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• izmirli (2145)
• [2008-06-14 1:27]

merhaba dear jean paul
wonderful park and daily life.excellent colours and shadows.good composition.well done my friend.
selamlar ve iyi günler.
gürkan akçakır.

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• Valerka (7080)
• [2008-06-14 2:00]

Hello, Poet JP,
A nice dedication to Aristotle's theme:)
I like these saunterers walking peacefully under the Indian sun and I see a park well maintained and benches still unbroken by vandals.
An interesting idea implied by the shot and it's in harmony with Aristotle's .
We weave our way to find our half to walk on together.
Very nice mood in this shot.
But why are these umbrellas black?
They should be in lighter colours, otherwise, they let more heat through.
Why not white umbrellas? Moreover these ones seem to be used as parasols?
TFS
Valerka:)
I'll be back

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• pablominto (30367)
• [2008-06-14 3:05]

Hello JP,

I like the colour palette, it is so rich and alive!
The point of view is effective in creating this good feeling of depth, good lines take my eyes through the frame...
Elements are well placed, and I notice no one wants to use the empty benches... probably too hot in the sun!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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• siolaw (22741)
• [2008-06-14 4:05]

Hi JP,
Well composed image with the couple balanced by the benches line up and perspective... Colors are strong and details sharp enough.Greetings
Laurent

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• trekks (8947)
• [2008-06-14 5:25]

hi JP

Lovely view of the garden and path of yellow earth to give strong contrast and color. Good composition.

tfs, bill

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• imtiyaz (842)
• [2008-06-14 8:27]

hi jp,

The mix of sand color with the green is too good.
At last nature is the best example for color combination.
the old type of seating arrangement is too cool.
And coming to the point of pair I like the synchronization in their walking, specially with an umbrella.

NOTE : "Note is simply superb" :)

- imtiyaz

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• vincz (17520)
• [2008-06-14 9:15]

Very very pleasant one. So true, nothing special, just tender love, just natural. Very nice.

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• zeynepe (4488)
• [2008-06-14 10:12]

Hi My Friend,
What lovely couples youy captured.
Again superb composition and superb note :)
Congrats,
Iyi günler:)
Zeynep

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• gracious (12830)
• [2008-06-14 11:22]

Hello my friend JP,
sorry for the delay!
many thanks for this beautiful scene from the park!
very good exposure and focus with those wonderful colour and flowers!
my best regards to you and family always
greeting from NZ
Tony

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• amazon (5444)
• [2008-06-14 17:31]

sevgili jp,
great composition,
interesting frame,
superb note,
ellerine saglik,
selamlar,
iffet

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• AiresSantos (25790)
• [2008-06-14 23:34]

Hi JP
Amazing dailylife picture with the people walking in this beautiful garden. Nice POV and colours.
TFS and greetings
Aires

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• bostankorkulugu (25573)
• [2008-06-14 23:41]

the most romantic spot in trivandrum for the couples?... when you are the one who is taking pictures everything and every place becomes a source of romance you know it dont you jean paul?:)... all the best my friend...

korkut

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• azaf1 (9307)
• [2008-06-15 0:34]

Hi JP
What a lovely place. Very good perspective nice vivid colors and a very nice poem quoted. A very good composition in all respects
Compliments, my friend
Argiris

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• marietom (20953)
• [2008-06-15 1:10]

Hello Jean paul,

Une belle promenade, entre ces bancs, avec un beau sol de cette couleur que j'aime. Très belle composition, une de plus !
Bon week-end
Marie

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• COSTANTINO (11286)
• [2008-06-15 1:53]

Hi JEAN PAUL,
Thanks a lot for your visit and for your wishes for my 2ooth
photo.I am for a few days at the island Samos and I LL return
to my town tomorrow on sunday..I am expected from you not
crtitique only poem dedicated to my photo...
Now,this one is romantic and brings memories not only to
me but t everybody,good lighting,beautiful song...
Bravo as always
Costantino

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• riclopes (26946)
• [2008-06-15 2:31]

Olá Jean Paul, it seems like heaven for couples in love. There's a strange magic mood in this coloful scene. First I thought that would be nicer to see that first couple alone, but now I like to see more in the distance...it makes the place more special with love being spread everywhere and not only by a single couple. Wonderful perspective and colors, great presentation as usual.
best,
ric

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• Flavia (8002)
• [2008-06-15 3:07]

Hi Jean,

Nice relaxing mood yu convey in this scene. Love the colors and compo, it looks like a painting.

Regards,

Flavia

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• jhm (67962)
• [2008-06-15 3:20]

Hello Jean-Paul,

Nice poem what you us show, but your looked to the couple on the path.
Very well composition and lovely colours generally.
The both sides with the benches, care for a good persective, this line leads us good toward depth in background.
Very well done.

Have a nice weekend,
John.

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• dareco (11183)
• [2008-06-15 12:02]

A very beautiful and romantic feeling to this. I love the colors!! A wonderful note as well. TFS and have a happy day!

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• josepmarin (26438)
• [2008-06-15 12:14]

Hi Jean Paul,
This scene is very agreeable, has great life and feeling, by the couples walking along this park.
I like the chromatism of the image, its colors are nice, and the great graphism that create the benches aligned on both sides of the frame.
Good work.
Friendly regards,
Josep

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• Deepforest (7513)
• [2008-06-15 13:15]

Hi Jean Paul,
nice scene and good colours. I like especially rich greenery in the background. Great note as usual. Well done my friend.
Best regards from Poland,
Andrzej

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• isabela_sor (33266)
• [2008-06-15 14:03]
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• axiotea (12160)
• [2008-06-16 0:55]

Hello J.Paul
I can feel the heat and I think you've managed well the light condition which gave warm colors...Here, the peaceful atmophere is well conveyed.
Cheers
Marilyn

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• ALIRIZA (14200)
• [2008-06-16 5:12]

Hi Jean,
Very nice scene from the park. This is a fantastic and lovely romantic atmosphere. Well done my dear friend...
All the best...
Ali Rıza

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• Cretense (35899)
• [2008-06-16 5:22]

Hi Jean Paul!

Fantastic photo, excellent,m relaxed daily life scene and a beautiful romantic double portrait at the same time! Framing, perspective and composition are flawless and the colours are brilliant! Excellent note, too! Congratulations!

Hercules

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• leo61 (31920)
• [2008-06-16 9:52]

Hi Jean Paul!
A bit strange colors,but a good daylifescene.
Composition is good with these rows of empty benches and the couples walking there.Good contrast between the orange sand and the green tones.
Regards,Leo

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• gokanlam (3515)
• [2008-06-16 10:31]

Hi Jean, you captured the people with the details at the park well.. the empty benches and their small shadows, and the couple with umbrella gives the information about the daily life there.. i like the colors of nature too,
iyi haftalar,
ReLa

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• syd1946 (16583)
• [2008-06-16 10:52]

Hello Jean Paul,
another beautiful moment you captured here and send it to the poetic world...
The light and colors,the couple and the benches standing in a row to enjoy the passing...

many wishes my friend,
Thomas

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• brevbrev14 (20059)
• [2008-06-16 14:09]

Dear JP, another good composition with the benches in a good diagonal line..
i like the young couple under the umbrella a sweet moment well captured
ciao!
Valeria

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• dvlazar (4565)
• [2008-06-16 22:41]

Good shot! These typically Indian garden with the many park seats is a nice sight to see. The framing of the couple is spot on in the top right... and the umbrella creates more interest.
Well done,
DAve

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• aadilj (10696)
• [2008-06-16 22:56]

A winner from a winner after a long long time. I like the way you have used the depth and the lovely perspective. Great colours and lovely moment

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• Wanda1 (8337)
• [2008-06-16 23:04]

Hi Jean Paul,
Looks like a lovely day out...sunshine, bright greens and vibrant colours. Love the rows of curly benches.
Regards
Wanda

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• papagolf21 (48625)
• [2008-06-17 0:36]

Bonsoir, cher Jean-Paul,
La photographie convient parfaitement à cette note élégamment présentée.
J'aime ces couleurs saturées, l'ambiance chaude est encore mieux retranscrite à travers cette composition.
Image parfaitement composée.
Amitiés.
Philippe

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• emka (9017)
• [2008-06-17 13:00]

Hi Jean-Paul, my friend,
beautiful poem and interesting note about the influence of Aritotle on science. I like this photo very much - nice couples walking, with Indian women beautifully dressed, nicely shaped benches and splendid greenery.
Well seen and done.
Best regards

Malgorzata

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• zhelach (3460)
• [2008-06-17 13:21]

Hello Jean Paul!
Lovely scene! Good composition and perspective! Beautiful colors and details! Nice note!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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• adores (12657)
• [2008-06-17 15:28]

Hi Jean!
A different shot this time. It was really hot, I believe. I like the colours and the lines of benches, they make a good composition.

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• jusninasirun (7045)
• [2008-06-17 17:32]

Hello JP. Beautiful warm perspective with strong contrast of this composition. The human interest are well captured and very well done. Best regards. Jusni

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• edytungkal (3557)
• [2008-06-17 23:27]

A nice garden which lovely romantic couples inside...I think the empty benchs has give a nice combination to the picture. Colours a little bit to saturate but it still ok, i like the athmosphere and especially the lovely note. Well done Jean friend, have a nice day...

daniel

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• ElAprendiz (5175)
• [2008-06-19 6:25]

Hello Jean Paul:

It's hard to find photos of TTE in this style: romantic and full of harmony. That's what you've accomplished here, see the harmony of the environment, with beautiful tones and balanced frame.

The note very expressive, by the way.

I love, no doubt. Congratulations

John

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• JCG (16988)
• [2008-06-19 22:11]

Hi Jean Paul,

I like much all these benches in the disorder. A beautiful moment photographed. The judiciously saturated colors are pleasant and reinforce the aspect buccolic of the scene. Beautiful glance and thank you for this pretty poem.

With all my friendships and with soon,

Jean-Charles

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• Manuj (433)
• [2008-06-20 0:42]

hello jean
nice to see here too my friend.
this is a nice shot
lovely moment captured here
full of life and spring.

regards
MAnuj MEhta
:)soon

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• Bluejeans (19444)
• [2008-06-20 9:50]

Ola Jean ,
Que belo jardim com estes bancos alinhados de um lado e do outro com este caminho amarelo no meio , gostei muito das pessoas a passear , a natureza e muito bonita , parabéns!!
Um abraço Gonçalo

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• tehanu_f (6444)
• [2008-06-20 11:15]

Dear Jean Paul,
For me, India is that hot, saturated orange in your photo. The women in their saris, other colours -green and red- and the elegant benches beautifully compliment the image. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Fusun

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• robertosalguero (17268)
• [2008-06-20 23:43]

Hi Jean Paul,

What a beautiful place to go for a stroll. The people seem very placidly enjoying their time under the sun and the benches seem to provide that extra sense of relief here. Nice colours and sharpness. You did an excelent job again friend :-)

Roberto

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• toto (14253)
• [2008-06-21 10:26]
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• MayaG (2049)
• [2008-06-22 3:55]

So nice and so romantic :)
I love the rich colours and vegetation all around, and those beautiful benches. Umbrella, as a symbol of protection, is so cute here. Well done as always, dear JP!

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• berek (23722)
• [2008-06-23 13:06]

Hi Jean,
its colourful picture. I like pastel colours and your composition. greetings.
Burak

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• noborders (12643)
• [2008-06-25 14:10]

What pleases me the most in this photo, apart from the very warm colours, is the fantasy in the alignments of the benches and the profusion of them - an area probably crowded after sunset !
Very nice and romantic,
This reminds me that I should have a look at your TL gallery as well !
Best regards, dear friend,
Cath.

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• ChrisJ (57323)
• [2008-06-28 1:29]

Hi JEAN PAUL

Good repetition of the old chairs, which also add superb linear perspective. Good sharpness, & tfs!

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• mikolaj_kawa (14869)
• [2008-06-30 1:08]

Hello Jean Paul! Nice scene. Good POV, very good perspective and composition. Original colors. Very good work. Well done!

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• shevchenko (4370)
• [2008-07-22 20:00]

Hi Jean,
Good pov to show a natural corner from the park with still remain in a mud path, look like all of them toward their own destination from a same location, good shoot, thanks for sharing.
Ally