China town, Kobe #4 Photo

Photographer’s Note

Again, China town in Kobe.
He looked at me briefly and looked away. I kinda missed the timing for the photo. I only hoped that he showed his face...

I am sorry that I haven't been involved much in TE lately, I think I have been missing many good photos. Sorry for that too. Hope I will be back soon.

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kajspice (4534) 2006-06-07 8:54

I think the angle could be slightly lower here, to give more attention to the food. Perhaps a little to the right to see where the smoke is coming from?

Your pictures a more clear these days...

nwoehnl (120) 2006-06-07 15:37

Hiya Lauryn. Always nice to see new entries from your Kobe Chinatown series - too bad you missed the moment when he looked in your direction, but even as it is the scene is again a quite vivid one that depicts the food stand nicely with a lot of details. I like how the smoke emerges from the bottom corner. The b&w works okay although I would imagine it can't look much worse in color :)

weswang (18223) 2006-06-07 23:24

Hi Lauryn, It is nice to see your new post. It looks that the handsome young man was busy handling his business. Nice capture of the steam on the side. You have well made use of the complicated lights condition to show this well contrasted image.

SUKIYAKI (0) 2006-06-09 3:18

人を信じ、罪を肉まんは美味しいです。
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tcht (7298) 2006-06-11 7:09

Hi Lauryn,
A well composed daily life scene. The smoke is effective to add extra atmosphere and mood to the shot. Good B&W treatment and lights. But I'd probably prefer a wider frame.TFS
Cheukhin