innocence

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• maciekda (19444)
• [2004-02-18 19:33]

it is a very nice portrait, the pose of the girl is very natural, the background is interesting also, I don't see anything to complain about here, it is a very nice start!
welcome to TE and keep posting!

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• PeterDF (264)
• [2004-02-18 19:54]

A very nice portrait, very sweet. Her hair seems to blend right in with the background. I look forward to seeing more of your portraits.

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• Opus (0)
• [2004-02-18 20:24]

Sweet shot and a wonderful first upload. The wood grain made a nice wram textured background for this little cutie.
Was LP one of your favorite lesser-known places as it was mine?
Welcome to TE!

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• CVTJan (1244)
• [2004-02-19 1:50]

Dear Eric, great portrait, the wooden doors make a perfect background. She poses like a pro but has her backpack left open. Children..... ;-) Great first shot for TE, welcome.

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• khamoon (162)
• [2004-02-19 2:21]

Very cute shot, very nice background. The shot is a bit blurry but it's a very good first post, welcome in TE !

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• clodreno (0)
• [2004-02-19 3:51]

Very nice image Eric. I love it. Glad another one who likes protraits on this site. The colors are wonderful, the pose too. I won't say anything about the colors but : marvellous.
Welcome to TE.

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• pascalbene (1726)
• [2004-02-19 4:53]

Bienvenue Eric ;) Félicitation et bienvenue sur TE. Cette photo est décidément très belle et l'encadrement du bois fait parfaitement ressortir la chaleur des teintes.

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• manny (21378)
• [2004-02-19 8:21]

This is an amazing portrait shot. Love the colors and the pose of your subject. I would probably crop it tighter but truly, this shot is a standout from among all the portrait shot I saw today. Congratulations and welcome to TE, Eric.

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• Darren (6805)
• [2004-02-19 8:32]

Really great first posting Eric. A wonderful, softly lit portrait and a very nice expression on her face. I also think the backpack she is wearing is a nice touch. Personally, I wish you had aimed a little lower, as I don't care for the cropping through her hand, and I might have shot slightly to the left as well to bring her off center a bit. Overall though, this is a very, very nice portrait.

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• scalerman (21983)
• [2004-02-19 11:16]

I'm out of points today, sorry. But the only thing detracting from this engaging shot is weak focus. Still it's really nice. Looking forward to seeing more.

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• eelliott305 (776)
• [2004-02-19 12:03]

Very nice portrait. As well as a lovely model, you have found a nice background in the grainy wood.

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• BobTrips (1847)
• [2004-02-23 22:07]
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The door is wonderful. But the real subject is the beautiful little girl. I think you should bring her forward, let her fill the frame.

I did a Workshop in which I cropped down and moved her from dead center of the frame. I also Sharpened.

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• touristdidi (8525)
• [2004-02-24 11:14]

Very cute young lady!

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• ianmcall (1213)
• [2004-02-25 23:29]

Softly lit yet still clear; warm colours in the skin the clothes and the background. Nice work. I like the texture of the wood but am somewhat torn; a bit of cropping out of the background would give a bigger image of the girl. Perhaps trim the dark bar on the right?

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• smael (2874)
• [2004-03-01 17:52]

Incredible wonderful portrait Eric!
Such warm colors and a background that really brings out and match your subject!
If I should say something it might be to se her hands, and the frame around the picture is a bit strange ;) But those two things I don't think lessens the beauty in this shot, and is not really a critique...

Terje

ps. thanks for your comments!

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• jacob (289)
• [2004-03-02 14:22]
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This style of photos remenber me the exceptional work of brasilian Miguel Rio Branco (see Magnum site).
In this case, the light levels and colour's nuances are very well captured and makes an excellent portrait!

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• amitai (861)
• [2004-03-04 17:47]

She is something, and her look seems like a look of someone who had lost her innocence though she doesn't know it yet. Great intimacy, great image.

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• vbourrut (27958)
• [2004-03-06 12:07]

La petite fille est peut être un peu trop centrée dans l'image, mais c'est un très joli portrait d'enfant que tu nous présentes la

A+

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• baronkris (64)
• [2004-03-24 16:44]
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• claudiaf (4325)
• [2004-03-30 15:14]

She's lovely!

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• edelweiss (55)
• [2004-04-22 9:36]

Ce sont de telles photos que j'aimerais prendre... Magnifique.

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• elena (1052)
• [2004-05-10 20:43]

I would go all teh way to Laos and back just to take a photo like this (well, and anotehr one of a street vendor, and another one of an old man, and maybe a few more as well...) hahhaa...
what i love most is the little girl´s face/ she is soo cute, then the door as background, nice to have just one neutral color. And of course her expressive look, which you captured at the right second. Light, saturation, and composition of a pro.

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• iamxa (2687)
• [2004-06-18 7:10]

Kind, sweet and wonderful portrait. Excellent red tones and light. I like very much.

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• ma-tibou (4566)
• [2004-09-18 10:51]
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Coucou éric, première photo publiée, et déjà une merveille, un visage d'ange, des couleurs formidables. Vraiment très jolie.
Amitié.
Désolée toujours et encore à sec , mais j'adore tes photos.Demain!!!!!

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• rinusj (64)
• [2004-09-19 16:28]
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• sn00zie (2382)
• [2004-09-21 11:13]

charming portrait-the pose comes across as natural and innocence is just the word to describe this one. love the heavy wooden door as a backdrop

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• michel_r (1110)
• [2004-12-06 16:55]
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Je fais un tour dasn tes anciennes photos. Celle ci est superbe, avec un air effectivement innocent... Beau mariage de la robe et du bois de la porte. Le sac à dos apporte une touche bcp plus moderne mais il fait tellement gamin qu'il va bien. Bravo, eric.

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• pridel (233)
• [2005-01-07 12:01]
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Eric
je fouille dans tes tiroirs et je trouve cette petite fille super mignonne.
j'aime beaucoup son demi-sourire, sa tête penchée, son regard, tu parlais de séduction...ça marche bien. les oculeurs sont belels aussi. Sans doute aujourd'hui tu ferais un cadrage différent. notamment pour ne pas avoir à lui couper les mains.
Pascal

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• alimo3 (6708)
• [2005-04-06 16:17]

Bonsoir Eric,
après une petite ballade dans ton album ,
je découvre ce portrait qui a un charme fou,
les couleurs sont chaudes et magnifiques.
ce cadrage me convient tout a fait.
c'est la classe !!!
Amicalement.

Tom

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• keribar (40972)
• [2005-04-07 23:33]
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A mon tour je découvre cette magnifique image que l'on ne peut pas manquer si on voit le thumbnail: Parfait exemple d'une photo d'enfant avec un arrière- plan idéal.

Izzet

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• ballyna (1689)
• [2005-04-13 6:13]
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• mlopes (492)
• [2005-09-02 9:35]
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I've made a travel in time back to 2002 and your very first photo in TE. I love to see the "grow" of the member as a photographer, but in your case the high quality is equal.

the images may be sharper or colourfull now, but only because there's no need to scan... because the inner skills are the same.

Beautifull photo friend.

Mário

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• sensei2004 (11)
• [2005-11-18 10:35]
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Very impressive portrait. The girl's face is so expressive.

rafi

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• gebala (0)
• [2005-11-21 13:43]

hello, this photo is really lovely, she is standing so cute, so thin girl with great eyes, she is really inocence, her bag is also very fashion this season;) well done Eric

you know;)

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• marietom (24216)
• [2005-12-03 12:10]

Quelle jolie photo !
Marie

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• AMZINCHIA (1082)
• [2006-03-21 22:19]
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Bonjour Eric,
Petit à petit, je découvre tes photos qui sont pur enchantement du monde. Celle-ci est un petit chef-d'oeuvre esthétique et humain. Quelle jolie pose et quelle confiance en toi de la part de cette toute petite fille. Les couleurs sont merveilleuses, avec juste cette bande d'obscurité à dtoire. Je dépose, délicatement, cette délicate photo dans ma galerie de favories. Bravo, --amz

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• jonathan_hart (17725)
• [2007-10-29 2:29]
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quel beau portrait, la pose saisie est parfaite, très bon rendu des couleurs et de la texture du bois, c'est tellement mignon qu'on ne va pas chipoter sur le cadrage, une photo plus que charmante !
amicalement
jo