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chawax (6120) 2008-11-07 11:00

Hi Reout,
The idea is good : a simple composition with these desert areas we imagine in Mongolia, and this van to attract our look. But I think the framing could be better. You didn't center the van, which is a good choice, but I think you should have put it on the right, not on the left : the van goes towards the left ... and it hurts the left side of the picture. Putting it on the right would have given it the space to the left. I think you gave too space too to the sky, which has an interesting colour but is too uniform. Maybe a panoramic format would have been ok here. TFS.
Regards,
Olivier

AlvaroGuijarro (288) 2008-12-04 17:56

Van left, van right... never mind!
It is very important the idea of the van, so we can have the idea of deepness and wideness of landscape. I´d like to be a horse and to gallop just till the horizon... or simply to feel the wind.
Light is very special, shadowed by a large and thin cloud, getting thicker and darker in the horizon.

Bravo, I like a lot.

Regards
Álvaro