silk

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• mdchachi (1597)
• [2002-11-19 11:58]
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I like the motion, textures and spartan variety of colors in the scene. Comes together very nicely.

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• BobTrips (1835)
• [2002-11-19 12:58]
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I like the color and 'feel' of this shot.

Would prefer to have a bit faster shutter speed, enough to keep the motion in the hands but sharpening the face.

Have you tried cropping off a bit - top and bottom?

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• sam (897)
• [2002-11-19 16:37]
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This image has terrific mood. I really like the green color cast and the motion blur. Although the colors are powerful, I'd guess that this would make a strong b&w image too, because of all the texture. I really feel that this is a deep, dark, tucked-away place where the real work of hand-crafted silk cloth goes on. I would crop a little off the top, to remove that object in the top left corner. I'd also rotate the frame slightly to the left, to get the walls alligned vertically. Great shot.

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• Sean44 (63)
• [2002-11-21 14:46]

I really like this photo, it's one of my favorites on the site. I do, however, agree that it could benefit from some cropping (top & bottom).

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• Bayleaf (1329)
• [2002-12-15 19:35]

Great Shot! I agree that cropping the top a little to remove the object would be good, and a little more detail in the face would have been nice. Still, a wonderful peice of work.

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• Luko (13504)
• [2003-07-19 16:49]

What a great shot with its apparent simpleness but excellent lines and shapes balance, the blur is top notch to figure the exact arms move.

I would stuff my eyes with all that green.

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• Maru (0)
• [2004-11-27 12:04]

I like the composition. Good contrast with the shadows. I agree to crop a bit the bottom, but i like the top. The shadow growing in the middle provides dramatism to the atmosphere.

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• kellyfajack (0)
• [2004-12-14 14:38]

Now this is a photograph!

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• retesh_gondal (169)
• [2004-12-14 14:48]

great shot but blurrness takes away all its charm...still commendable effort!

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• carobnica (1326)
• [2005-07-21 9:02]

beautiful colours, movement, atmosphere...
great picture...
ana

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• Prisley (1019)
• [2005-09-08 11:20]

Nice shot!
I totally agree with BobTrips about the sharpening of the face. It would have been a perfect shot then. Anyway, I like this green, and the lonely light upon him. Very good scene, which would worth a note I think ;o)

Cheers,
Prisley