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Kalam mill


Kalam mill
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Jim Stahl (JimStahl) (25)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 1986
Catégories: Nourriture
Appareil photographique: Yashica FX3, Kodachrome 64
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Date de soumission: 2008-04-30 6:45
Vue: 445
Points: 5
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
A visit to the Kalam mill along the Swat River.
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A kschanna: Thanks KamranJimStahl 1 05-05 07:01
A SteveH: Thanks for your commentsJimStahl 2 05-01 18:11
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Hi Jim, I like the composition, showing the man in a typical pose (one which my joints will not permit) and his world, grain, house and landscape. A slightly tighter crop might have been good, making the man more prominent in the image. It is also a little soft, especially noticable on his face. Not so soft though that it couldn't be fixed in PS. Cheers, Steve

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 23 N: 88] (3912)
  • [2008-05-01 9:54]

Jim, you have well covered the MILL though there at that time it was hydro mills, it tells the whole story as he's cleaning the grains, TFS.

Hello Jim.

Nice shot of the mill worker in action. The PoV is nice and the man looks content.

I made a few adjustments to it and its in the workshop.

Good work
Regards
Kamran

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