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Copyright: Adam Silverman (adam) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 440 W: 33 N: 31] (848)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 1991-07
Catégories: Vie quotidienne
Versions: version originale
Carnet de voyage: Russia Trip
Thème(s): Tender moments ..., TE Trieste exhibition: “Viaggiando Immaginando” [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2002-10-07 4:01
Vue: 4719
Points: 7
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Old women with girl on park bench.
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Since the background really doesn't add anything to the shot, I would probably go with a panorama-like crop (with longer dimensions so we can see the details better).

I would rather have said: "Women with girl on park bench" ;o)
Wonderful natural scene, nobody seemed to have noticed you and the composition is perfect. It's only a pity it was overexposed and lost some sharpness...

(I read Luko's suggestion and I discovered again your work. So much different styles you have! - I wonder if you are aware of how much pleasure you have offered to many of us here... ;o) - Joyeux Anniversaire & Merci encore!)

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6370 W: 3330 N: 7858] (29073)
  • [2003-10-05 16:58]

Bonne composition très bien cadrée des "baboochkas" :-)
Les blancs sont un peu surexposés, le léger flou est dû peut-être au scaner.

Good composition tallied very well of the "baboochkas": -) The whites are over-exposed a little, the light blur is due perhaps to the scaner

great moment.
exposure is not quite right but the moment is perfect.
don't know how to use photoshop that well so cannot give you any advice.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1106 W: 66 N: 1344] (4297)
  • [2004-11-15 20:59]

Hey, I like this - real life - no posing - all natural! I'm know nothing about 'over-exposure' or 'light blur" or '?' - I think you captured it perfectly...

Adam, I would call it "Babushki"! :) Yeah, a typical Russian scene in the park...

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