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• thea0211 (3633)
• [2007-03-21 11:44]

hi caleb,
friendly colorful composition, nice eyelead given by the road, good POV, DOF, lively colors and a pretty model hidden by a large and dark umbrella :): very well seen and composed!
tfs and have a perfect day,
dora

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• mataHd (143)
• [2007-03-21 12:01]

I like the colors and we really get the feeling of the rain.
Thanks,
-Pierre

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• photographer123 (4665)
• [2007-03-21 12:14]

Hi celeb....
Well scanned shot..the drain lead the eyes from left to right of the frame...wonderful composition..best wishes...SUBIR

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• InasiaJones (16947)
• [2007-03-21 12:17]

Hi Caleb,

Great, great composition, with this sinuous diagonal created by the pathway. You were determined enough to confront the weather and the results are worthwhile.

Your subject is highly photogenic, with her traditional clothing and umbrella. You’ve waited the right moment to catch her in a perfect position. Everything is top in this image, but might looks a little bit over saturated, particularly on her skintones.

Gorgeous shot!

André

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• fijiphil (1332)
• [2007-03-21 12:18]

Fantastic shot. Perfect use of that snaking s-line of the road to give depth to the shot.

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• ben4321 (9367)
• [2007-03-21 13:20]

Great composition here Caleb, I like how the line of the roadside ditch runs from corner to corner diagonally across the frame, and the positioning of the girl works well. I like how you caught her between the two rocks.
There's something about her pose that is very appealing, a certain elegance and grace, although she looks a bit p*ssed off, probably at the weather.
Excellent job.

Cheers,
Ben

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• mesutilgim (28114)
• [2007-03-21 14:12]

Hi Caleb,
Great capture ; wonderfull compo and good pow. Great colors.
TFS
MESUT ILGIM

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• tjanze (5674)
• [2007-03-21 14:22]

Hi Caleb!
Great simple motive and good composition.Rain adds stronger colors and good mood.Well done.
Regards!

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• faubry (29411)
• [2007-03-21 14:42]

bonjour caleb, very beautiful comosition with curve, good composition, wel done
francine

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• TravelerNL (2435)
• [2007-03-21 19:03]

Hi Caleb,
Although it rains the colors of the fence still look very saturated to me.
Good compo with an effective split in two parts separated by the water drain.
The girl stands out well with her somewhat traditional clothes and umbrella.
Well done,
Harko

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• DarkoG (2276)
• [2007-03-22 4:39]

Lovely shot, Caleb.

VEry nicely presented mood of this scene. Warm colors provide a good contrast to rainy day. Well composed.

REgards Darko

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• Mistral (12428)
• [2007-03-22 17:22]

Beautiful image, Caleb
the sinuous road, the great colours emphatized by the wet, the lovely tribesdressing model... A lot in your image masterly composed!
A smile
Luca

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• Furachan (0)
• [2007-03-23 8:51]

What a lovely shot, C, with that tell-tale 24-70 magic (what a LEND, eh?) The way you have detached that girl from teh backgruond and the rain is masterly, really.
Nice one!
Francis

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• ALIRIZA (15222)
• [2007-03-26 9:26]

Hi Caleb,
Great POV, excellent composition. Rain adds stronger colours.Well done....
Friendly regards...
Ali Rıza

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• delic (6614)
• [2007-03-26 16:22]

Trying to catch up with back-log... This is quite interesting as it seems like the umbrella is selectively focused. Very dynamic with the slightest blur of the feet. Regards,
Hakan

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• arindam_thokder (3894)
• [2007-03-26 17:41]

Love the details in this shot, Lovely rainy mood. Colors are great as always.

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• jmdias (10699)
• [2007-05-16 21:29]
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caleb

your page has so many fabulous portraits. I think this one is fabulous too, the lines, shapes and the girl are very nice put here

jorge