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Generations race
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Copyright: Vincent Zolt (vincz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2964 W: 85 N: 5038] (17528)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2007-04-16
Catégories: Vie quotidienne, Humour, Transports
Appareil photographique: Canon EOS 20D, Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Exposition: f/5.0, 1/30 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Thème(s): Your top rated, les gens, Daily life, street scenes & candid, Moody, Your favorites [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2007-05-07 1:48
Vue: 1542
Favoris: 2 [voir]
Points: 105
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
On the banks of the Thu Bon River, 30 km south of Da Nang, lies the ancient town of Hoi An. Occupied by early western traders, Hoi An was one of the major trading centers of Southeast Asia in the 16th century. Hoi An has a distinct Chinese atmosphere with low, tile-roofed houses and narrow streets. The original structure of some of these streets still remains almost intact. Declared a World Heritage Site by UNESCO Hoi An ancient town is exceptionally well preserved.

Cars are forbidden in Hoi An and motorbikes are banned from entering historic streets most of the day. What a reflief for anybody coming from Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City! Bicycles own the streets as it was the case many years ago all over Vietnam.

Following suggestions from Sabyasachi (sabyasachi1212), David (banyanman) and Grazyna (ninaL), I post in a workshop an enhanced version of the picture with less blue and a different crop.

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excellent panning shot!

Hi Vincent,
Very nice panning. I like the mood here, as well as the colour and composition. Will it be nicer if there is more space infront of them? Just a thought... i am still learning..

regards..

Very good panning image Vincent, the result is very nice as the the protagonists of it, compliments.

I like the colours of this picture. Nice composition and idea.
Best wishes,
Achim

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  • kri54 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 400 W: 30 N: 23] (1379)
  • [2007-05-07 3:16]

superbe photo, mise au point sur la fille bleue esst une bonne idée, déjà par la couleur des vêtements cette femme trouait la photo mais le flou de tout ce qui n'est pas les vélos et ce bleu est génial bravo

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  • Stepan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5261 W: 95 N: 4064] (27007)
  • [2007-05-07 3:22]

Très typique là encore, avec pas mal d'énergie et de vie.
L'arrière plan est très dynamique et le flou ne gêne pas ici, bien au contraire.
Stéphane

This is an excellent panning. I am still trying to get a proper one. The colours are simply beautiful as are their expression too. Well done.
Antonio

Hey Vince: fine panning; perhaps a little over-conrasted. Nice expressions on your friends here. best, c

Hi Vincent,
What a joyful and also very colourful image. The way the girl smiles does even give me a smile. Good work on the exposure with the moved blurred background...very nice.
Regards, Henk

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8565 W: 916 N: 11537] (57444)
  • [2007-05-07 4:45]

Bonjour Vincent

Superb motion blur, with marvellous symmetry between the 2 traditionally attired cyclists. Good sharpness & colour. C'est tres bon, et merci!

Hi Vincent,
Excellent panning and extremely well chosen POV. Just a thought though, that kid in the red black stripe is a bit distracting. I would have preferred cropping her off and perhaps a bit from the bottom to maitain the proportion.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi

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  • Wanda1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1226 W: 21 N: 1561] (8777)
  • [2007-05-07 12:32]

Hi Vincent,
I love the movement and the bright blurred colours here. The expressions of the girl and the man are great, it does look like they are having a race. Nice composition with the diagonal line of the river.
Regards
Wanda

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 202 W: 0 N: 70] (2183)
  • [2007-05-07 15:14]

very exiting Vinc.
jan

salut vincent
une photo bien réalisé, le fond en filé dynamise le cadrage, belle couleur et c'est un plaisir de voir ces gens avec toujour le sourire, bel instantané
amitiést
gilber

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4922 W: 138 N: 532] (45390)
  • [2007-05-08 2:28]

Bonjour Vincent,
great shot, fine stopped motion, interesting reportage. I like the colours also.Interesting note and well done photo.
Gr., Aleksander

Bonjour Vincent,
Belle scène capturée. J'aime beaucoup l'arrière plan flou et le dynamisme des cyclistes. Bien vu.
Amicalement
Christian

Hi Vincent
Superb idea!A very nice panning and great composition,colours.
Well done
TFS/Regards

Bonjour Vincent,

You have produced a very successful action shot, with the cyclists in excellent focus set agains a blurred, amorphous background. The note also is highly informative of this exotic land. Warm regards,
Bulent

Great observation and note.
Wonderful timing and cadrage my friend.
They seem to be so free in their simple life...

Greetings, A.

Bonjour Vincent,
Very well captured composition!
Excellent sharpness, light and nice colors!
Best regards, Uğur

Hi Vincent,
very intresting shot, happy mood is the power point in this photo.

Thanks for sharing
Mohammad

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3544 W: 463 N: 5130] (18422)
  • [2007-05-08 6:43]

Bonjour Vincent,

Un bel arrière plan que donne beaucoup de dynamisme aux sujet principaux de la photo, les cyclistes. D'après ce que je lis ils ne sont plus gênés par les problèmes de polution générés par les voitures et autres mécaniques polluantes. Une belle et intéressante image, merci Vincent.

Avec toutes mes amitiés et une très bonne journée,

Jean-Charles

Nice capture with different ages people, dear Vincent !
Great blured background, very well managed the exposure time.
My best wishes
Aires

hi vincent..
Wonderful pan shot..caption is correct....but you can keep more space on left side...SUBIR

Hi Vincent!

Amazing daily life scene and great multiple portrait. The "central" composition works very well in this case. Very impressive "panning" too. Congratulations, my dear friend!

Hercules

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12760 W: 273 N: 17393] (70015)
  • [2007-05-08 12:46]

Hello Vincent,

What a image with your F/5 and 1/30 almost a miracle, but this is great class, I've a lot respectly for this one, with the focus on the bikers and the blur background, nice done.

Best regards,
John.

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4365 W: 88 N: 5576] (27313)
  • [2007-05-08 16:11]

Speed and joy in a tranquil world.
No haste.
Perfect shot, Vincent. beautiful.
Regards, Gerrit

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3759 W: 373 N: 7867] (34426)
  • [2007-05-08 17:08]

Hi Vincent!
This is the vision I had in my mind ,when I travelled to Vietnam,and I was dissapointed when I saw the very busy motorized traffic there.Now you`ll understand my question ,how you liked Vietnam.
I´s a great shot,full of joy and you managed the panning technique very well.
Regards,Leo

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  • cessy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2257 W: 99 N: 2341] (13573)
  • [2007-05-08 18:29]

haha.. very very nice !!!
excellent moment, Vincent
race between beautiful girls and old man :) who won ?
great expression and the panning is perfect btw

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  • gary91 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2163 W: 492 N: 3239] (14697)
  • [2007-05-09 1:43]

Bonjour Vincent,
Belle composition avec un effet de filé magnifique. Cette jeune fille est particulièrement photogénique et a porte une toilette aux couleurs douces qui la fait encore mieux ressortir du cadre de l'image.
Belle performance et joli coup d'oeil, bravo.
Bonne journée à toi.
Amicalement, Christian

Salut Vincent,
Très beau filé de ces vélos.
L'arrière-plan coloré est beau, et le rendu du flou de mouvement le met en valeur.
La cerise sur le gateau est l'impression de course entre les vélos, bien vu !
Bonne journée,
JB.

Hello Vincent,
Great panning shot. The colors and composition are very beautiful
Regards,
Seref

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  • delkoo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4060 W: 239 N: 5382] (26539)
  • [2007-05-09 4:54]

bonjour vincent
excellent panning qui met bien en valeur les cyclistes plein d'energie et de joie, une belle image.
didier

Hello Vincent,
Good panning technique paid off well here!
Fine details are captured in the bicyclists,
well composed image with attractive colours!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Vincent,
Full of life and very expressive genre photo. Excellent composition and dynamic atmosphere. This is a very fine and suggestive idea. Splendid work, indeed. Have a nice day, thank you
George

What a lovely capture, Vincent, and a well executed panning shot. The cyclists are just a tiny bit blurred, so perhaps 1/60th would have been a better shutter speed for this. Also, I think if you had cropped away the person in red on the right, and some of the road below the bicycles, you would have had your cyclists better positioned within the frame (i.e. riding into the frame and not centred) and this would have really improved the overall composition. Your exposure is good though, and I like the interesting effect created by the panning on the reflections in the canal. Cheers . . . David

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  • alainh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4173 W: 148 N: 6846] (32493)
  • [2007-05-10 1:25]

salut Vincent
tres sympa ce filé et une image bien reussie sur le plan techniques et esthétiques.
du mouvement, de la couleur, de l'emotion.
amicalement
alain

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1828 W: 268 N: 1966] (16487)
  • [2007-05-10 6:21]
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Bonjour, Vincent.
Quelle photo extraordinaire !!!
La vie, la vitesse, les couleurs, les gens, la ville...
J'apprécie beaucoup la DOF et le timing ici...la vitesse est là, pourtant, les gens sont plus nets que les bâtiments, et en fait, la vitesse, c'est comme ça : elle est montrée ici de LEUR point de vue : les objets qu'ils dépassent sont plus flous qu'eux-même.
Toutes mes félicitations pour cette prise.
Juste un tout petit b-mol : la balance des couleurs tire vers le bleu (il devait y avoir du soleil et les gens sont à l'ombre), c'est assez facile à corriger en PS. Je te le dis, mais j'ai fait souvent cela, et on me l'a fait remarqué ;), donc, maintenant, je "joue l'experte" : D.

Amicalement, Grazyna.

le WS est super

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  • stego Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3726 W: 621 N: 5230] (16692)
  • [2007-05-10 18:58]

Salut Vincent,
The motion blurr enhances very nicely the great joyful atmosphere of the image given by that big open of the girl. She seems to be floating on the air, propelled by her joy. The colours and diffuse shapes of the bg , that red figure and the "grandpa" are also very pleasant.
Technically it's perfect.
Amicalement, José.

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  • Luan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2007 W: 246 N: 1894] (15879)
  • [2007-05-11 4:10]

Hell Vinz
Ah Hoi An, quelle jolie bourgade ;o) qu'il etait agreable de se ballader le long de l'eau ;o)
Non serieusement ce panning fonctionne tres bien, c'est dynamique et souriant...que demander de plus !
Luan

Olá Vincent, excellent panning shot with a beautiful colorful blurred background. Great POV capturing them from the front and marvellous cheerful expression on the woman. Somehow, I think I prefer this version with the colorful background at right. Great shot!
Have a nice weekend,
ricardo

Hi Vincent, splendid panning with wonderful colors and great composition, very well done, have a nice week end, ciao Silvio

Hello Vincent, Terrific. You have captured the spirit of Vietnam. I have always wanted to do this type of panning but I need to practice. Well exposed, the background looks very appealing. Best regards. Danil

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  • CliffW Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 472 W: 85 N: 334] (2304)
  • [2007-05-12 17:11]

I like how well this turned out for a panning shot too. Good smile on the girl and the man is interesting too. I think maybe in the new version that I'd have cropped off the left rather than the right. I liked the woman in stripes, plus I think panning works best to demonstrate motion when the blur is behind the main subject. But still the subjects themselves are very good.

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  • Yffic Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 917 W: 17 N: 1227] (6008)
  • [2007-05-13 15:11]

Bonsoir Vincent.

Belle photo pleine de dynamisme et de couleurs.
Tu maitrises à merveille la technique du panning.

Amicalement.

Yves

Bonjour Vincent
Une image très dynamique avec les cyclistes pédalant à un bon rythme et tu a su saisir au vol, un joli sourire. La version proposés dans le WS me plait bien, mais toutefois je préfère celle ci ou les contrastes sont plus soulignés.
Amicalement
Marilyn

Salut Vincent
Je l'aime beaucoup celle là. C'est plein d'élégance. le panning est réussi.
J'aime beaucoup
Amicalement
Bertrand

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  • Flavia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1777 W: 99 N: 1920] (8106)
  • [2007-05-16 17:13]

Hi Vincent,

Excellent panning, reflecting a daily life scene on this country. The WS is just perfect once really corrected the 2 aspects that could be improved on the picture.

Regards,

Flavia

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  • daddo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1796 W: 32 N: 1958] (8603)
  • [2007-05-18 21:30]

Hi Vincent. Marvellous shot full of energy and grace. I remember vividly how elegant the girls and women look on their bikes as they glide along the streets and especially across bridges where they appear like beautiful white spirits detached from the material world. I like the humour in your title and the expressions. Lovely impression from a lovely country. regards. Klaudio.

A nicely panned shot Vincent, and I like the contrast between the happy expression on the face of the girl and the serious plodding look on the face of the old chap behind.
Ideally I'd have liked to have seen more blur in the background, but for that the bikes would have had to have been travelling faster.
On the whole, it's very well taken, good work.

Cheers,
Ben

Salut Vincent, c'est bon ça, symap ce filé, de bonne facture, de biais en plus, peut etre encore plus difficile a réaliser que de profil, a 1/30 sec bravo pour la netteté sur la (les) cycliste!
Colorée et contrastée a souhait, j'aime beaucoup

Excellant job, a very jolly photo and the panning is spot on. Great colours and the composition is perfect

Simon

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  • xuaxo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2666 W: 183 N: 2505] (4150)
  • [2007-06-19 7:33]

I like very much the difference faces of man and girl (woman). He is steady/concerned in what he is doing. She seems more like enjoying/playing.
F

Ola Vincente ,
Fantástica esta tua foto da rapariga e do velhote andarem de bicicleta o efeito panning ficou fabuloso , gostei muito das cores, parabéns!!!
Um abraço Gonçalo

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