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Left Out


Left Out
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Copyright: Kate EarnestDeyoung (KateinDenmark) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 94 W: 4 N: 78] (370)
Genre: Lieux
Média: Noir & blanc
Date de prise de vue: 2008-05-24
Catégories: Vie quotidienne
Exposition: f/7.1, 1/200 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Date de soumission: 2008-05-30 11:31
Vue: 279
Points: 6
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Here is an Austin (the car) that has been put out to pasture. I imagine it feeling very left out by the horses it shares its pasture with, and also left out by its owners.

On a more serious note, I took this picture and two others because I really liked the scene. I've been looking back at it periodically for a week now, and I'm still not happy with my final best effort to get it right. Here I've enhanced the color, cropped it, made it B&W and then sharpened it. I'm posting the original to the WS, so if anyone thinks they can do a better job, PLEASE try.
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A sevy: Good point.KateinDenmark 1 06-07 13:29
A bobocortis: Very nice!KateinDenmark 1 05-31 13:03
A bobocortis: Very nice!KateinDenmark 1 05-31 12:54
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Hello Kate.
I've seen the first WS (very nice, colorful) and I've added a second one, where the Austin is vanished.
I hope you like it..
Kind regards.
Bobo.

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  • sevy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 660 W: 120 N: 1018] (5927)
  • [2008-06-07 0:48]
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Hello Kate,

You have already performed a nice work of translation in B&W. To my mind, this B&W version is much better and interesting than the color one.
The vertical framing is also well adapted with a good inclusion of the car to drive the look to the horses. The real question is why you have only done a horizontal framing at shooting and not directly this one? You have lost a large part
of possibility of large size printing with this big crop.

Yves.

Kate

I'm glad that you posted the original image along with this in a workshop. Its interesting to see the work that you have done and the result is a much improved shot.

B&W is very effective here. Also the tighter crop and the idea of showing only half of the car is very good.

You have a good composition with the angle of the car leading the eye to the horses.

Very good work.

Finlay

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