Grande Casse

Critiques [Translate]

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• joolsb (322)
• [2008-07-03 4:05]
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The light is fantastic - just a hint of alpenglow - and the foreground detail works nicely. That said, there's something about the composition that bugs me. Although you've placed the mountain itself on the upper third, its reflection begins on the centreline, thus dividing the shot into a dark lower half, where there is comparatively little of interest and a bright upper half with lots going on. It seems a little unbalanced - yet if you crop away some of the foreground you are left with a picture that is just too symmetrical...

The other problem, as I see it, is you appear to have lightened the reflection to the point where it is as bright as the mountain itself. This is unnatural. Darkening the reflection would take the edge off the symmetry and would help restore some balance to the comp.

However, these are minor criticisms. It's a very eye-catching image!

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• lespicaros (2419)
• [2008-07-03 4:14]

Belle prise que vous nous ramenez (Vincent, Xavier et toi)
Le commentraire de Joolsb est intéressant et est sans doute à exploiter
Beau travail
LP