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The Last Survivor


The Last Survivor
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Copyright: Thomas zeglis (syd1946) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3425 W: 67 N: 4621] (16487)
Genre: Lieux
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2008-05-31
Catégories: Architecture, Oeuvres d'art
Appareil photographique: Nikon D70s, AF NIKKOR 28-200 ED 3.5-5.6
Exposition: f/7.1, 1/200 secondes
Versions: version originale
Thème(s): Michèle's favorites N° 3 [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2008-06-20 7:15
Vue: 642
Favoris: 1 [voir]
Points: 100
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The Last Survivor

The sound that was piercing the abandoned buildings sounded like the
cry of baby.In fact it was a cello that an airflow was giving heart-breaking
life to its strings. It was enough though to put him out of his oblivion
and started thinking again. The only thing that he could do.
He didn't even had a name. Before the great distraction he was
just a number, that he doesn't remember anymore. He started again
his try to arrange his thoughts, but with no effect
He is wondering what period is he in. It has not been night for at least
two years if his calculation is right. Sun disappeared
a long time ago. It is not cold neither hot. It just the humidity
that continues to burn his punished body.
And this damned cello doesn't stop. He prefers it though
from the merciless throb that sometimes comes from the
nuclear generator of the abandoned power plant.
He stopped moving around the city anymore. Silence everywhere,
there is no one around. Even the rats were exterminated, the basic
source of food. He didn't eat at all but he was still alive. Even as a
shadow of his living self.
When he was young he used to thought that he could live without a
God but not without love. Now, he has none of them. Is there anything
to love? The uncolored walls, the burned trees or the sea
that is a boundless desert of moving mud. He could love the cello
but even that is something that he had never seen with his own eyes.
Not to mention that its echo stopped few minutes ago.
Silence prevailed everywhere again. Silence that can't be distinguished
from sadness.Sadness that is the sky of the last survivor, now.A sky without
sun or moon, without stars to count in order to fall asleep...

A short story by Happysad.

Ο τελευταίος επιζών

Ο ήχος που διαπερνούσε τα ερημωμένα κτίρια έμοιαζε με κλάμα μωρού.
Στην πραγματικότητα ήταν ένα τσέλο που ένα ρεύμα έδινε σπαρακτική
ζωή στις χορδές του. Ήταν αρκετό όμως για να τον βγάλει από την λήθη
του και να αρχίσει πάλι να σκέφτεται. Το μόνο πράγμα που μπορούσε
να κάνει. Δεν είχε καν όνομα. Πριν από την μεγάλη καταστροφή ήταν
απλώς ένας αριθμός, τον οποίο δεν θυμάται πια. Άρχισε ξανά την
προσπάθεια να ταξινομήσει τις σκέψεις του. Μάταια όμως.
Αναρωτιέται σε ποιά εποχή βρίσκεται. Έχει να νυχτώσει τουλάχιστον
δύο χρόνια, εάν βέβαια κάνει σωστά τους υπολογισμούς. Ο ήλιος έχει
εξαφανίστει για πολύ καιρό. Δεν κάνει κρύο, ούτε ζέστη. Μόνο η υγρασία
συνεχίζει να καίει το ταλαιπωρημένο κορμί του.
Και αυτό το καταραμένο τσέλο δεν λέει να σωπάσει. Το προτιμάει όμως
από τον ανελέητο βόμβο που έρχεται μερικές φορές από το εγκατελημένο
πλέον εργοστάσιο πυρηνικής ενέργειας.
Έχει πάψει πια να τριγυρνάει στην πόλη. Παντού ερημιά, δεν υπάρχει
ψυχή πουθενά. Εξαφανίστηκαν ακόμη και οι αρουραίοι, η βασικότερη
πηγή τροφής. Δεν έτρωγε καθόλου και όμως ακόμη ζούσε. Έστω και
σαν σκιά του εαυτού του.
Όταν ήταν νέος πίστευε ότι χωρίς θεό μπορούσε να ζήσει, χωρίς αγάπη
όμως ποτέ. Τώρα δεν έχει τίποτα από τα δύο. Τι να αγαπήσει άλλωστέ;
Τα αποχρωματισμένα ντουβάρια, τα καμμένα δέντρα ή την θάλασσα
που είναι μία απέραντη έρημος από κινούμενη λάσπη. Θα μπορούσε
να αγαπήσει το τσέλο, άλλα και αυτό ούτε που το είδε με τα μάτια του.
Άσε που σταμάτησε η ηχώ του εδώ και λίγα λεπτά.
Πάλι σιωπή επικράτησε παντού. Σιωπή που δεν ξεχωρίζει από τη λυπή.
Λύπη που τώρα είναι ο ουρανός του τελευταίου επιζώντα. Ένας ουρανός
δίχως ήλιο και φεγγάρι, ούτε αστέρια να μετρήσει για να κοιμηθεί...


Μία μικρή ιστορία από τον Happysad.

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is that a mural?... this is very well seen and composed with the postnuclear-war-like surrounding thoma... you are a master in creating sad stories of such scenes... bravo file mou...

korkut

Ανατριχιαστικά τρομακτική η φωτογραφία σου θωμά, αλλά ακόμα περισσότερο τα λόγια του Happysad. Λόγια και εικόνα που τρομάζουν γι' αυτό που έρχεται, γι αυτό που ήδη έχει κάνει την εμφάνιση του με όλη του την ασχήμια και την άσκημη μυρωδιά του.
Θα προτιμούσα να μην έβλεπα την φωτογραφία σου, να μην διαβάσω το σημείωμα σου, έτσι για να κοιμηθώ για λίγο ακόμα τον ύπνο του δικαίου και της...βλακείας, κάτι σαν την στρουθοκάμηλο ας πούμε.
Χαιρετώ
Κώστας

kalimera dear thomas
wonderful interesting colours and composition.excellent note and atmosphere.well done my friend.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hello Thomas,
I like much this composition which could be very dramatic, but that it is necessary to look with humour. It is a very beautiful composition and cheer to have seen it and have put in image.
Have a nice day and week-end
Cordially
Joël

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1484 W: 119 N: 1969] (9157)
  • [2008-06-20 8:34]

Agapite Thoma kalispera
Ekeino pou einai apithano mazi sou einai aftos o iperoxos sindiasmos simeiomatos kai foto pou panta dinei mia enallaktiki eikona stin pragmatikotita, mia alli optiki s afto pou nomizoume oti einai pragmatikotita. Tha statho stin foto kai mono. Oxi gia tin gonia lipsis oute gia to eikastiko apotelesma alla gia ton agona tis kathimerinis zois na morfopoiisoume enan trisathlio xoro san tous akaliptous stin Thessanoniki, na ekfrasoume tin antithesi mas sto tsimento pou mas exoun thapsei zontanous kai na valoume tin ipografi mas opos palia grafame t onoma mas stis plakes tis ekklisias h stous kormous ton dendron.
Na pernas kala
Argiris

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  • ifanik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1590 W: 52 N: 2465] (14130)
  • [2008-06-20 9:20]

Ekplhktikos anatrixiastikos yperoxos kai kalitexnikos syndyasmos fwtografias kai keimenoy
Kati tetoia kaneis kai mas ksetreleneis
Ti na pw?
Se parakalw mono synexise na mas problhmatizeis
Xairetw
Nikos

Hi dear Thomas,
That is the difference between an eye which only looks and another one which can also see !
Very nice capture with great graphism. Good pov and amazing details and wonderfull notes.
TFS and best regards
MESUT ILGIM

Ti alien einai ekeino ekei panw arxhge mou pou to petyxes? xexe
Koufh fwtografia. O tropos pou th symplhrwneis mou aresei, xrwmatika thn exeis proseksei.

Xairetw 8wma, kalo PSK
Stelios

Hello Thomas,
A very good idea. I like the note and the photo. Good and sad story. Well seen.
Best regards,
Fabrice

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  • Vames Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 519 W: 0 N: 332] (2719)
  • [2008-06-20 11:41]

γεια σου Θωμά,μια λήψη γεμάτη σκέψεις και ανάμεικτα συναισθήματα!

Γεια σου Θωμά
Εντυπωσιακή φωτογραφία με πολύ έντονα τα σημάδια της μεγαλούπολης. Σε συνδυασμό με το κείμενο δημιουργής ένα σκηνικό που θυμίζει ταινία τρόμου κι επιστημονικής φαντασίας.
TFS - Χαιρετώ
Χρήστος

Helo Thomas
You have realy sense for art and i see this like art
The details are maybe a bit better than the survivor ,but the survivor is intresthing to
TFS
Cheers,Braca

???
What is it? Who is that? How come?
Did you get into contact with the 3rd kind? The visitors form outer space?

My god! Whatever this is, it is no different than a main character of a creepy sci-fi movie. I am really curious what that "thing" is doing on the condenser of the air conditioner. Is it a toy? Is it an alien???

An original, alright. Cool tones. Did you paste over that figure on top of the AC condenser?
cheers,
CT

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  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3893 W: 402 N: 6448] (22030)
  • [2008-06-20 22:37]

Hi Thomas
A funny statue in a peculiar place! You framed it well here. I like the decayed textures and colors here. Good framing too
Ta leme
Laurent

Hello Thomas
Une très bonne photo pour illustrer une une sombre histoire!!
Un bon coup d'œil pour avoir vu ce personnage (et son ombre encore plus inquiétante sur le mur). Une image triste avec quelques touches de couleurs pour rappeler la vie.
très bien vu!!
Amicalement
Hervé

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  • danos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3320 W: 83 N: 4773] (18116)
  • [2008-06-21 1:03]

Θωμά καλημέρα,
πολύ απαισιόδοξη η σημερινή σου φωτό με τον τελευταίο επιζόντα.Αλήθεια που την ξετρύπωσεσς αυτή την σκηνή; Όπως πάντα τέλειος συνδιασμός φωτογραφίας και σημειώματος.Η αθλιότητα των ακαλύπτων σε όλο τους το μεγαλείο, που πραγματικά σου δημιουργεί απίστευτες καταστάσεις.

Καλό σαββατοκύριακο,Δάνος
Θωμά,το Καλοκαίρι είναι εμπρός μας,υπάρχει γύρω μας φως και χρώμα,δες το και κατέγραψέ το.

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  • drago Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 575 W: 174 N: 763] (4622)
  • [2008-06-21 2:32]

Θωμά καλησπέρα,εξαιρετική "αστική" φωτό,το "πλάσμα" πως βρέθηκε εκεί?Μου θυμίζει πολύ μια ταινία τρόμου,το Mimic όπου γενετικό υλικό αναμίχθηκε και τεράστιες κατσαρίδες βγαίναν παγανιά μιμούμενες τους ανθρώπους!(Ευτυχώς ήταν αρκετά καλογυρισμένο και όχι γελοίο όπως εύκολα φαίνεται)!
Καλό Σαββα/ριακο
Παναγιώτης

Thomas,
A great catch.
You composed it perfectly, and you caught nice graphics and a mood.
I like a lot,
Regards,
JB.

Geia sou Thoma,
alpi eikona kathimerinotitas ,xwris idieteres texnikes perganines ma omws sunama mas epireazei kai mas kanei na skeftoume,kai na provlimatistoume gia polla pragmata pou sumbenoun dipla mas kai pername adiafora..
idiaitera to katapliktiko sou shmeiwma kai o tropos pou to sundiazeis me to kadro sou ,
kalo weekend,kai bravo sou
xairetw,
Costantino

hi Thomas

Very urban and abstract. You are really observant to interesting urban landscape and this is a thoughtful way of capture details. UFO alien?

tfs, bill
later

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  • TopGeo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1944 W: 79 N: 2565] (11739)
  • [2008-06-21 9:45]

Geia soy Thoma!
Diabazo kai ton tromo kai ton blepo!
Alla elpizo pos kapoy eki ine krimeni kai i lisi kai tha tin broume....min apelpizomaste ...
an stripsoume ligo ta matia mas pio kei isos tin doyme .... to eyxome
na'sai kala
georgios

Hello Thomas,
what a story you created around this photo!!! it looks like a place after a nuclear deploimant where nothing is at its place no one has survived, apart your character, to tell us the after story.
Worse, we are all living near, too near to a kind of reality like this one you describe in your photo and note, so maybe i can consider it a warning, a sad and perturbing warning...
Cheers.
Paulo

Witaj Thomas,
what an amazing shot!! Unusual atmosphere. Really interesting capture and great story in your note... You are very creative person and good observer too.
Best regards,
Andrzej

Olá Thomaz

Entre tantos fios, cores, grafismos encontamos detalhes interessantes como a estatueta que parece estar olhando lá para baixo. Parabéns.
GA
Vera

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  • UlfE Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1442 W: 16 N: 1447] (5783)
  • [2008-06-21 22:10]

Hi Thomas,

Wow, this is very well seen. I love this well composed and exciting picture with its strong colours. A really good photo-work. TFS and have a nice Sunday!

Cheers,

Ulf

Olá Thomas, incredible scene so well presented with the short story - it's perfect for this image! How do you find these situations?!? Love the sci fy mood that the note gives...
Have a nice Sunday,
ricardo

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12522 W: 269 N: 16554] (66190)
  • [2008-06-22 5:27]

Hello Thomas,

A very nice capture with great graphism, this is very well seen and composed with the specially surrounding of threads and other disturbing elements.
You did very well.

Best regards,
John.

Hi Thomas,

"He stopped moving around the city anymore. Silence everywhere,there is no one around. Even the rats were exterminated, the basic source of food. He didn't eat at all but he was still alive. Even as a shadow of his living self."

What can be written more than this?
The last survivor of a world .. that smiles love, care, protection !!

Your creation of this sense is a perfect reflection of the many hidden hearts...
I admire this concept, and you :)
I smile, saying : "NAMASTHE, DEAR THOMAS"

Take care,

jp

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4140 W: 86 N: 5038] (24525)
  • [2008-06-22 18:30]

Ha Thomas,
well seen and excellent composed.
Regards, Gerrit

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2894 W: 618 N: 3123] (37813)
  • [2008-06-23 0:52]

Really impressive photo. It looks as an Alien... And this mood of dirty town. Well done, indeed.
Regards.

Hi Thomas. He seems perfectly suited to his surroundings, very melancholy with the odd bright colour for contrast. Well composed and presented. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Paul.

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8697 W: 916 N: 11536] (55941)
  • [2008-06-23 2:31]

Hi Thomas

The abstract sculpture certainly acts as a good focal & anchor point, in this otherwise drab & uninteresting urban landscape. Its subsidiary shadow echoes the theme of the attached note. Tfs!

Γεια σου Θωμά!

Είναι απίστευτο, το τι προσεξε το μάτι σου πάλι! Υπεροχο κάδρο και συνθεση, πολύ καλή εκφώτιση, αλλά το πιο σημαντικό΄είναι ο τρόπος που "βλέπεις" τον κόσμο που μας περιβάλλει! Συγχαρητήρια!

Ηρακλής

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4400 W: 226 N: 5996] (28848)
  • [2008-06-23 10:03]

Hi Thomas,
Quel ambiance particuliére, un peu comme une scéne d'un film a science fiction, bonne note d'acompagnement
intéressant contraste du clair et du foncé
Have a nice evening for you
cricri

Hi Thomas,
Your composition is interesting graphically, has dramatic strength and produces a worrying sensation, especially for the strange specimen that is sat on the compressor of the air conditioning, which seems to stalk his next victim.
There is a lot of graphical information in the image, in a setting in closed plane that works very well.
Best regards,
Josep

Hi Thomas,

Again an interesting short story with this almost lugubrious image.
I think we are lucky that we can’t hear that howling cello.

Groet Rob

Bonsoir Thomas
très belle photo. le graphisme et les couleurs sont superbes. j'aime beaucoup la texture des façades; Une très belle ambiance. Bien vu.
Xavier

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  • kpav Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 51 N: 278] (3195)
  • [2008-06-23 16:27]

Γεια σου Θωμά, απίθανη η φωτογραφία αλλά ακόμα καλύτερο το σημείωμα με το εξαιρετικό κείμενο. Καταπληκτική δουλειά που συνθέτει συνθέτει συναισθήματα και προβληματισμούς. Χαιρετώ,
Κώστας.

Hi Thomas
Amazing composition with many details. I like the note and how you framed it. Fine colours and sharpness
TFS and have a nice day
Aires

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  • greek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 711 W: 0 N: 488] (4276)
  • [2008-06-24 4:09]

kalispera agapimene mou file,

poly omorfi skini, me megali melanxolia kai thlipsi alla kai vathy mynima, se efxaristw,galantis

Hello Thomas.
A great shot, you had got an excellent eye.
The shot is humorous but reach of meaning at the same time.
Well done.
Best regards.
Bobo.

Phew! It's amazing how you do this and find the inspirations for your depictions. You were so right to leave it in colour. Somehow those touches of red make the whole "Scenario" more horrific. Good work
Kath

Hi Thomas.

Again, a nice picture. The sad "story" with this photo fits very well...

My compliments again...

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  • doubay Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 973 W: 56 N: 904] (4463)
  • [2008-06-25 15:07]

Os poromenos fan tu sci-fi afti i fotografia fisika ine poli tu gustu mu. Makari na plakonane akoma perissoteri exogiini san ke afton na dinane kapio endiaferon stin athliotita tis neoellinikis architektonikis.
Omorfi, exipni ke evrimatiki fotografia!
Chereto
Andreas

Εξαιρετική ισχυρή σε μηνύματα και εικόνες φωτογραφία. Ίσως μία από τις καλύτερές σου μέχρι τώρα. Νομίζω ότι ο HappySad θέλει 5 μέρες διακοπές για να δει ίσως τα πράγματα πιο αισιόδοξα! :)

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  • dip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 0 N: 907] (8777)
  • [2008-06-28 13:58]

Geia sou Thoma,
allo ena teleio pantrema fotografias kai simeiomatos pou pernane munimata me ena eksairetiko kalitexniko tropo,
pantos an o teleutaios epizon katantisei san auton pano apo to klimatistiko,tha protimousa na exo fugei pro pollou,mazi me tous pollous :)
xaireto,
Dimitris.

Hi Thomas. A unique way of personification. A wonderful treat to go through your well articulated note. The survivor, it appears to me, is radiating in glory -- yes, glorified through your vision. Regards.
Partha

What the hell is that? Where you find it? Amazing the all that think......
Where are they? The resident evil?
Thank you for that.

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  • Stepan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4980 W: 93 N: 3863] (25403)
  • [2008-08-22 23:30]

First, you discover the light and the colors. And you understand how subtle it is.
Second, you realize how perfect is the sharpness. And you understand it's an important post.
Third, you come back to the title and see there is something you didn't see.
Four, you see the shadow and you guess there is something unique in the compo.
Fifth, you don't know if it's an alien and but the meaning of "the last survivor" becomes clear...

Sixth, you can do nothing else but adding to your favorite !!!

Stéphane

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