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Bonjour Sylvain,
Une composition parfaite avec ces belles diagonales successives formées par les berges du canal et le train qui passe. Les reflets de ces beaux cumuls bien joufflus sont magnifiques et le cerise sur le gateau est le rappel du jaune du cloza en premier plan sur le nez du train.
Bonne journé à toi.
Amicalement, Christian
This color and clarity of this photo is absolutely gorgeous! I have struggled with the composition of photos like this in the past; there is too much you want to capture: the fantastic blue sky with great clouds, the shot of color from the plant in the foreground, etc. Sometimes, there is too much going on, and there is not an obvious subject matter, and the eye wanders too much over the photo. Take a look at the crop I did of your photo in the workshop and let me know what you think. Using the rule of thirds, I think it focuses you more on the train, and the yellow plant in the foreground anchors the photo and adds depth.
Greetings from Atlanta,
Don
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