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emad (156) 2009-07-20 9:39

Hi Otiun.this is a very nice shot.just a little empty space in the foreground.
thanks for sharing and good luck.

BilboCA (734) 2009-07-20 15:50

Hi, Oleg,

Very clever!

The repeated elements in the three silhouettes helps create visual interest.

I also like the contrast between the smooth black shapes and the dappled light on the water's surface.

I would prefer the ship in the background to be in focus.

I also wanted to explore a bit of exaggeration -- harder contrast, sharpening, more severe horizontal aspect ratio. I've put up a workshop photo for you to have a look and see what you think.

Regards,
- William

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bartekchiny (22) 2009-07-20 18:28

Hi, great photo, I like to use contour and strong backlight. You made it well, moreover vessel position is also very good, in strong point.

maglex (1598) 2009-07-20 19:17

Hi Oleg, great composition. Very artistic, form study. TFS, ALex

tomescuc (2837) 2009-07-24 19:06

interesting work, like the contrast between slihouettes and the gray/white natural tones, and ship in the distance adds a very good compositional element.
CT