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• delnaja (6454)
• [2008-07-25 0:00]

Hi Ivana,
good choice of the POV and composition : alone and two... Strange how the ground seems to be made in metal with this tone used.
Excellent!
Take care
Fred

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• jasmis (40925)
• [2008-07-25 0:01]

Great photo. Superb POV and really outstanding composition.
Regards.

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• maria (2300)
• [2008-07-25 0:07]

Hi Ivana,
This is a well-thought and interesting composition. Love the distribution of the light pavement with a dark coloured umbrella and darker pavement with lighter coloured umbrellas; it's very effective. However, I my humble opinion that pavement is missing some 'textures'.
Regards,
Maria

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• romanaa (2474)
• [2008-07-25 0:07]

Ahoj Ivana,

taky miluju Cohena a též tu prší a prší. Perfektní náladovka se vzory dlažby a příjemnými odlesky.

měj se hezky

Romana

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• marion44 (3219)
• [2008-07-25 0:09]

Hello Ivana,
A lot of melancholy there, enhanced by the choice of B&W and the geometric tiling.
Your photo inspires a lot of feeling. I find very impactful the way you composed it, people passing and "meeting" in complete anonymity, hidden under their umbrella. Of course the POV is great to make tense this feeling.
I like the way all the choices you made about his photo (POV, B&W, composition etc.) creates this melancholic mood.
Have a nice day, sunnier than this one hopefully ;)
Marion

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• tomescuc (1774)
• [2008-07-25 0:16]

Neat composition. I like how the pavement is parted into the wet, gleaming area and the opaque part. Different parallell paths..
rgds,
CT

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• lestans (13238)
• [2008-07-25 0:28]

Beautiful composition, texture of the ground, light and colors.
Well done, TFS
Livia

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• danasam (1055)
• [2008-07-25 0:32]

HI Ivana, very good B&W work, excellent POV, great timing too. very well done.
Sam.

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• hatti52 (12300)
• [2008-07-25 0:46]

Hi Ivana,
wonderful composition with excellent POV
B&W is good choice
congrats

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• izmirli (2351)
• [2008-07-25 3:54]

merhaba dear ivana
wonderful black white composition.excellent light and shadows.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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• Dpbours (7893)
• [2008-07-25 5:34]

Hello Ivana,

Wonderful song by Cohen.
And what a very nice black and white with those strong diagonals and patterns in the tiles! Love the off center placement and the 1 + 2 = 3 approach here. Very nice!

Greetings,
Dennis

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• zeca (18746)
• [2008-07-27 22:22]

Hello Ivana! Its a nice photo! The b&w fits perfectly to the image and you got it from a nice POV. Good to see the wet floor as a detail.
Regards,
Zeca

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• veronika (6016)
• [2008-07-30 13:43]

Ahoj Iv,
tato sa mi velmi-velmi paci, super kompo a cierno-biele tony.
Tak aspon na nieco nam bolo to nanic pocko ;)
Vero

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• marietom (24216)
• [2008-08-02 4:47]

hello Ivana,

J'aime beaucoup cette image de pluie, bien pensée en noir et blanc.
Bravo, superbe jeu d'ombres, de reflets, et très beau graphisme.
Bonne soirée
Marie

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• clio (14270)
• [2008-08-14 8:00]

Bonjour Ivana,
Bravo for this excellent shot!
I like the graphics of the ground with the drops which intervene, the opposition of both parts of the street with people who circulate the other way around.
very beautiful reflections also.
Congratulations!
Friendly
Diane

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• kensimage (8038)
• [2008-08-21 8:26]

What I like here, Ivana, is that the people with the light umbrella are on the dark side of the diagonal, and the one with the dark umbrella is on the light side. It's almost like yin and yang. "People with umbrellas from above" is not an original photographic theme, but when you bring in a new element like that, it's well worthwhile and very pleasing! Regards, Ken.

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• Asiulus (954)
• [2008-12-04 22:55]

This photo is like poem - few words, lots of place for analysis ;)Looks good desaturated. It resembles yin and yang balance, umbrellas contrasting with the background.