Summer at the Palace

Critiques [Translate]

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• sohrab (7405)
• [2004-09-20 12:54]

hello and welcome to trekearth fernanda
you need to work on your composition. it seems that you like taking photographs of windows, but you also seem to be taking the photographs in a hurry just for the sake of taking them. im sorry if i sound too harsh about it. i dont mins leafy borders in a photograph , but over here your focus seems to be on the building and the leaves are hiding a huge part of it.
it's nice of you to write a note laong with the photograph though.
thank you
take care :)

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• apazevedo (5469)
• [2004-09-20 13:27]

Olá, Fernanda, e benvinda ao TrekEarth! Concordo com o que escreveu o Sohrab e acrescento que a data também não fica muito bem na composição, em minha opinião, pelo que deves evitar incluí-la. De qualquer forma não quis deixar de escrever estas linhas para te motivar a "ir disparando", até porque assim se vai aprendendo (e também com as críticas que nos vão fazendo). Bom trabalho!

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• Hanssie (9131)
• [2004-09-21 6:10]

A pity of the date in this shot, but...it is wonderful, great light on the leaves and very nice building. Good work, Fernanda !

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• pamastro (7209)
• [2004-09-22 1:21]

The leaves add a softness to the shot. They may take up a large amount of the image but they also give a feel of peeking through the branches and brushing them aside to get a view of the building. It also adds a nice color. The amount of detail beyond is nicely rendered as well. The delicate work of the building and the leaves work together to create a sort of magical feel like this is a fairy tale castle. Nice job.

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• xuaxo (4224)
• [2006-02-24 2:13]
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Fernanda,
Gosto das folhas. Mas a data...
Então fiz um WS, aproveitando para retirar também a janela à esquerda. Se calhar bastava retirar a data.
Francisco