Aftersun in Cadiz

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• gokanlam (3114)
• [2008-01-06 11:17]

Hi Gil,
Welcome to TE!
The colors of the sky look great! But the details on the foreground make your photo disorganized a bit. You would create the composition by using the trees on the right only. But it's your first photo.. Be sure that you're going to learn so many things about the photography..
Some advices to you:
Write notes about your photos,
Visit the other members' galleries and write comments or critiques and read the written critiques..

PC: I have Panasonic Lumix too..
Good Luck!..
ReLa

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• jovenol (195)
• [2008-01-07 10:26]

Bons colors del cel. Hauries de millorar la composició. Vigila elements que fan nosa (el racó de dalt a l'esquerra). Sobren coses...
Abans de fer res sempre "s'ha de pensar"... encara que sigui només "un moment...".

Good whishes for the new year. You will be, perhaps, a good TE,

Regards,

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• Vames (2721)
• [2008-01-08 4:24]

holla Gil ,ciao !hai molti belli colore fantastico cielo ! salutare Vames !

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• degani (2311)
• [2008-01-08 13:16]

Hi Gil,
beautiful colours of the sky and magic atmosphere, good work, bravo
ciao
franco