Photographer’s Note
the beautiful climate in alshafa let give you a chance to contemplate, I took this photo while the father and his little daughter contemplate in the green mountain of Shafa for long time without talking,waiting for thier breakfast,they dont knew that I am there.
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ribeiroantonio
(21961) 2006-10-19 21:36
I really like the idea of your photo but to be frank I would compose it differently. I don’t think the girl on the left is important as she is almost off the frame. Also, I don’t like the pole and the bag on the right side. Regarding the towel on the foreground, oh well, nothing we can do now. So let live with it. I would like to post a WS for you to see my version of your picture but you do not allow for WS. It’s a pity! I have it ready anyway. Please let me know if you want to see it.
Antonio
Photo Information
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Copyright: sara salman (beautiful_mind)
(294) - Genre: Gens
- Medium: Noir & blanc
- Date Taken: 2005-08-00
- Camera: Casio XILIM
- Versions: version originale, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-10-16 13:45








