At the end of the day

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• Flavia (8002)
• [2008-03-25 8:49]

Oi Jorge,

Uma bela foto, com sujeito e composicao interessantes. Os telhados em zinco e a chamine, assim como os fios dao um aspecto grafico a comosicao. O amerelo dos barcos atiram a atencao pelo contraste de cores com os outros elementos. A composicao so seria melhor se os barquinhos estivessem posicionados no ultimo terco na parte de cima da foto, de qualquer forma o efeito e interessante.

Abracos,

Flavia

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• fabio_ts (12613)
• [2008-03-25 8:51]

Olà Jorge, I love this image for its originality and for the way how you have smartly composed, BRAVO+++

have a nice day,
Fabio.

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• Valerka (7080)
• [2008-03-25 9:13]

Hi,Jorge,
An interesting shot
I like its graphism due to the roofs lines.
TFS
Valerka:)

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• jusninasirun (7045)
• [2008-03-25 17:02]

Hello Jorge. I like the minimalist in your composition. Stunning simplicity anchoring the yellow boat perfectly on the sweet spot. Very graphical and nicely framed composition. well done and best regards. Jusni

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• Manamo (2854)
• [2008-03-25 18:00]

Hello Jorge,
very interesting scene my friend. Very flashy colors. However, I don't think that the composition is ideal. the roofs are not so bad in the compo, but the wires going through the boat and the chimney going through the other boat is very much distracting. So, I think it's the point of view that is not ideal...But you were very far, so you're not to blame. It's already good that you saw it.
SEe you!
Marc

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• siamesa (5699)
• [2008-03-25 19:43]

Oi Jorge,
Esse mar calmo está para peixe, mesmo, não é?
Embora distante, o pescador enfeita a cena e quanto aos fios, nem sempre se pode eliminar.
Abraços
Maria

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• pablominto (30367)
• [2008-03-26 0:11]

Hello Jorge,
Different and interesting composition!
Unusual use of metal roofs as foreground and framing for the yellow boats...
A well balanced composition with good colours!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• Sistercosmo (417)
• [2008-05-07 15:07]
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Hi Jorge,

this photo speaks strongly. Simple, strong colors and a fabulous capture! The man on the bright yellow boat seems natural and honest. And in the foreground, the roofs and the smoke from the smokestack are modern and somehow destructive. The contrast between nature and man's creation are simply wonderfully captured! The message is clear. We are moving away from our roots. Thanks!
Linda

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• paura (23240)
• [2008-09-29 18:02]

Jorge,
Uma boa imagem nessa bem composta fotografia. A fumacinha saindo é um lindo acréscimo.

Abraço

Paulo