day's end... Photo

Photographer’s Note

Evening in Bikaner and this sweeper's day was finished.

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kinginexile (2440) 2005-04-29 2:03

Hi, caleb

nice shot, in a way, very little happening, just day's end as you say, but your seized a good movement on her part to convey an atmosphere relative to your title, and her colorful clothes against the drab wall completes the attractiveness of the image.
Really cool you can post daily as you travel. A diary of sorts...

arnabchat (7052) 2005-04-29 2:11

ah ha! what a catch. i like the way you put it, she is leaving the frame. colors on a shabby bg, broomstick quite diagonal adding tot the compo. very good work.

thebecky (686) 2005-04-29 2:19

Great shot. I love the colours of this womans clothes against monochrome of the dusty road and the rough wall. The brush seems inordinately long!

apache (1426) 2005-04-29 2:21

hi Caleb,
I like the stark contrast of clours againts the dull background of the wall. Nicely taken with the women at the right end of the frame.
Ranjith

snuggleaphagus (4140) 2005-04-29 2:28

A veru pretty photo with the woman's clothing bringing so much life to this dull wall. Her posture indicates a rough and long day. This photo has so much movement and grace.
Good compsotion.
My happy faces are gone

Ina (2681) 2005-04-29 2:39

What a lovely picture ... So nice colors and a fantastic composition with this looooonng brush ... The atmosphere here is very much 'end of the day'... Thank s for sharing...Ina...

highpeak8 (139) 2005-04-29 2:56

i like the way you captured her sort of dragging the broom, it really brings out the feel of the end of a tiring day...lovely colours, if could have seen her face would be even better!

nerve (10212) 2005-04-29 7:46

Hi Caleb,
This is a very good composition imo. i love the diagonal of the broomstick.. very simple but elegant shot.
cheers.

AnimeshRay (8886) 2005-04-29 11:17

Very simple but elegant photo. The light from the front is well captured.
I kept wishing that the field incuded a bit more of the surrounding area and you had placed the camera a bit lower, near the ground. But this also works.

Paker (2636) 2005-04-29 12:25

Self-explanatory good capture.
regards,
Krzysztof

Leonie (8647) 2005-05-02 15:01

Hi Caleb,
THis is a really beautiful composition! I just love all of it...the colours, the broom...the simple background! Well done!

Léonie