Photographer’s Note
Time to rest and enjoy the view, done mountain hiking today....(I trimmed off some overexposed sky line, and repost, thanks to the idea from valuable critique)
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(82) 2006-01-25 11:55
Hi Sunny,
this one is a good exemple for the good Depth of field to compose.
I would like to make a suggestion in the construction of the picture, that OK three elements including the backgroud, the two people now, this one in foreground shoud have a good geometry of shouders I mean the line parralel to the frame and about the shadow, no shadoww on the dress, this would improve, the second one is not "at the good moment" by the direction because she will be stopped by the frame so she is a lost subject.
Go On ! :-))
Friendly
Jean Michel
Photo Information
- Copyright: Sunny HSU (miaoky) (15)
- Genre: Gens
- Medium: Couleur
- Date Taken: 2005-12-09
- Categories: Vie quotidienne
- Camera: Olympus E-300, Zuiko 40-150mm digital
- Exposition: f/6.3, 1/200 secondes
- More Photo Info: view
- Versions: Final Version, version originale, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-01-08 10:24
