church on fire Photo

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taken from Klenová castle, seems very dramatic

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bastacosi (37) 2006-09-12 11:45

Salut Martin,
Un réel contraste entre ce ciel gris foncé et cette lumière en premier plan. c'est splendide

Merci pour ce partage

picardo (2298) 2006-09-12 12:06

Hi Martin, I really like your picture. It has beautiful colors and intresting light effects on the landscape, but there is a problem: it is a little noisy. I've made a workshop for you trying to fix it.
TFS
Picardo

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joseelias (367) 2006-09-12 12:11

Very beautiful landscape, with a great play of shadows and light. The church is also very beautiful. Also like the framing with a goo placement of the church of center allowing us to explore the surrounding landscape.

Anyway there are some things that could be improved, like:

- cropping half of the sky to place the church in even stronger point and eliminate the vignette in the corners
- noise reduction in the sky
- more sharpness to enhance the details
- a higher f-number to get a longer DOF and clearer details in the distant elements
- just a little bit more contrast in the shadow areas to create a stronger image

DarkoG (2284) 2006-09-12 12:57

Nice landscape, but execution has some disadvantage.
I agree with remarks posted by joseelias.
IMHO you should make quite a diferent crop Crop out lower part just above this electric post and right side of same post and abut 1/3 of sky. That way you will get more dynamic photo in which will church stand out much stronger and you will eliminate overexposed lower part of photo.
Regards Darko

rbassin (4255) 2006-09-12 13:44

Hello Martin,
Superbe composition, j'aime beaucoup ce rayon de lumière qui éclaire localement ce paysage et le groupe de maisons autour de l'église.
- le ciel prend trop d'importance voir WS.
Roland

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pady (4800) 2006-09-12 14:01

Nice image but too much noisy. The WS's improve your composition very well.
Greetings
Pierre-André

ncfg (132) 2006-10-03 15:36