Seller, Islamabad Photo

Photographer’s Note

This was in the Juma Bazaar in Islamabad. It's sort of a bustling market, but this guy was rather isolated, against a wall with such vivid colors, I couldn't not shoot this pic.

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Berlingo (133) 2006-09-17 7:05

Bonjour,
Belle image ! En visionant, je me suis forcement dit "je la verais bien cadrée plus sérée...", mais je n'avais pas encore lu les notes.

fotoguy22 (1958) 2006-09-17 8:24

Hello Jim: You wrote in your profile that you wanted feedback so you could improve your photography so hopefully my critique will help. I also did a workshop on this photo. I get the impression that business was pretty slow for this guy due to the fact that it looks like he is standing against a wall all by himself. In the future you might want to make sure your final version of photos such as this one do not have the subject in the very center. This photo has potential. Please check out my workshop.

Greg

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muscovado (1530) 2006-09-25 18:57

Hi Jim,
Interesting shot with good background. What is he selling? TFS
Czaldy

adam_k (596) 2006-09-29 5:48

Good shot... Central composition is often frowned upon but in this case I think it's ok.
The only issue here is that picture is slightly too small and it's difficult to focus on the man's face...