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SamB (1948) 2007-04-28 23:01

Hello, Stephen--
This is a nice piece, giving a feel for the scale of the surroundings and utilizing a warm color scheme to set some mood. A few things that i feel like could be better, though--the bottom left doesn't feel tied in verey well, the goats(?) are cut in half and there is a large light brown object cutting into the frame above them that is a little bit distracting. Maybe from a few steps to the right you could have had a less of the distracting composition. Also, it would have been nice to pull the main orange building a little bit farther to the left of the frame. Finally, it reads just a little bit flat, could really profit from a little bit stronger foreground.
Thanks!
sam