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Critiques [Translate]
- portmanndominic
(1502) - [2008-07-01 7:58]
Hello Pat
original POV , good colours on the first scene the sand and the grass , for me I think to make a focus only to this and not on the backgrounds who have a sad light
best regards
Dominic
- MiguelP
(13013) - [2008-07-01 8:05]
Hi Pat, this photo reminds me to a Warren Beaty´s film "Reds" they walked through a landscape like this... About the photographic side of it, I like how you have handle the light here, with the mountains in the shadow, I also feel touched by the simple subject of this composion, simple but rather poetic.
Take care,
Miguel
Flat light is the bane of my life living here. As far as I have discovered concentrating on small details is best like you have done here. Using layers and masks it is possible to inject some life but the real good light cannot be beaten. I think I prefer the colour but then I probably would. B&W is not my forte at all, but I was told channel mixer is a better way of converting as you have lots of sliders to play with. CS3 has another thing just called black & white in with the adjustments menu, and I think I read in a photo mag that is even better. Rob always says good light is even more important for B&W. Your image should have some true white, true black and at least 9 shades of grey. Don't ask where I heard that last little nugget. I forget.
I hope you get some good advice. I will watch out for it.
When do you go to Ireland?
Kath
- Dpbours
(7430) - [2008-07-01 10:07]
Hi Pat,
Amazing how much one can tell about grass!
And you are not even Dutch! Then it would not at all surprise me if you had all the knowledge about all types of grass ;-).
Very nice how the sun hits the foreground and the light gradually diminishes towards the back of the composition. Great!
Greetings,
Dennis
- siggi
(1232) - [2008-07-01 10:11]
Hello Pat,
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful comp.
Regards
Siggi
- Floydian
(24263) - [2008-07-01 11:07]
Hello Patricia,
I prefer this colour version. why? Because only desaturation doesn't bring you a nice deep b&w. You have to work harder to get a perfect b&w. Yes i know, it's very difficult, can give you a larger depression than a colour version.
So therefor i like this one, especially the grass in the foreground which adds nice contrast to the landscape. Seems the crop was essentiel and you thought about it, that's good.
Light is indeed flat, but not that bad that this picture could not be posted..!!!
Regards, Henk
p.s.
Thanks for you honest and beautiful words on my picture, it's highly appreciated.
- Valerka
(7006) - [2008-07-01 11:20]
Hi,Pat,
A simple but ;ovely shot with implied idea of movement.The colours are very nice and natural.I've seen sth similar on our beaches, too.
TFS
Valerka:)
- danyy
(51483) - [2008-07-01 12:42]
Bonjour Pat,
ces herbes rejettent pas mal de lumières et apportent de la fraicheur. Le faible DOF donne du relief à l'avant plan.
Regards.
Daniel.
- avene
(5480) - [2008-07-01 13:28]
hello Pat,
I understand very well your frustration with flat light, it can ruin the most beautiful landscape, and there's almost nothing you can do about it.
on the other hand, where there's a will, there's a way :) I like a lot how you have focused attention on the small patch of grass that DOES have some light on it, it's definitely a way around the flat light. I know nothing about B&W, but I prefer the colour version, for some reason the B&W version looks even flater. here, on the other hand, the subtle change in tones brings out the texture both in the grass and in the sad, creating a delicate-looking image. nice :) and thanks for the great note.
regards,
Kristine
Hello Pat,
This is a simple but wonderful shot.
I wish I could sit there and enjoy the view and the atmosphere.
My preference goes to the coloured version :-)
I am participating to the 'no point day' action today, so... I will just give you a big smile :-))
Take care,
Marianne
- Emile
(16035) - [2008-07-01 22:13]
Hola Pat.
Excellent composition with the sand and high grass in the fg and the blurred DOF. Very well captured. Good colors and POV. I'm not fan of B&W shots, colors shots are my preference.
Well done. TFS.
Cheers.
- bakes888
(12524) - [2008-07-02 0:21]
Hi Pat. We have this grass growing rampant here also. So much so that the native has all but been lost. Moves are being made to reintroduce the native vegetation where they can. Well captured shot, good use of shallow DOF and light to separating the subject from the BG. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Paul.
- jlbrthnn
(19568) - [2008-07-02 3:24]
Hello Pat,
The light illuminates the good place, putting forward sand and grass with its gilded colors. It is a beautiful image of nature, presented in an adequate format. Bravo.
Have a nice day
Cordially
Joël
- xuaxo
(4063) - [2008-07-02 4:32]
Olá Pat
An opportunity to work on managing flat light?
You did it very well. It seems the grass was illuminated just for your beautiful photo.
SAA,
F.
- pablominto
(29211) - [2008-07-02 23:42]
Hello Pat,
Fine details in the grass and sand!
The light makes the grass stand out well against the darker background, and the composition has a fine main diagonal...
Certainly a peaceful place!
Greetings,
Pablo -
- danos
(18308) - [2008-07-03 2:42]
Hello Pat,
nice shot with a brilliant light to floodlight the foreground beach grass,thanks for the name.Here in Greece we have a lot of dunes that have a lot of colonies of these beach grasses, that indeed survive in very harsh and windswept ecosystems.Well done.
Regards,danos
- azaf1
(9163) - [2008-07-03 5:33]
Hi Pat
Much as it is simple in its content one can not but notice this excellent play of light and shadow and the shapes included in the frame. The lit foregraound with the dunes, look like the Michigan lake dunes in two colors and curve contrasted with the darker background that emphasizes even more the scanty vegetation in the sand
A very nice composition, indeed
TFS
Argiris
- Angshu
(24844) - [2008-07-05 22:09]
Hello Pat
Your low POV, the ripples of the sand, the tall grass & the dark BG, making the grasses glow as light falls on them. Given the light conditions, your crop is perfectly in order, and I do prefer the colour version. I am too, like Kath, not an expert in B&W, but I do think exposure & light is more important in that version because your represent everything in either pure black, white or shades of grey.
Best Regards
Angshu
- Bluejeans
(18632) - [2008-07-08 10:59]
Ola Pat,
Bonita composição com estas pequenas dunas cobertas de plantas , gostei muito do contraste entre o amarelo e o verde , o fundo desfocado deu bastante profundidade ,parabéns!!!
Um abraço Gonçalo
- robertosalguero
(16383) - [2008-07-11 2:48]
Hi Pat,
Very informative note about grass. I like this view because it is peaceful. The grass does make this scene more interesting as oppossed as having just sand dunes around. The light on the foreground is very good enhancing the details on the grass. Thanks Pat :-)
Rob
- gunbud
(17350) - [2008-07-23 19:28]
Hi Pat,
Lovely simple image these thick blades of beach grass seen in perfect light that brings out the beautiful tones of green and gold. Very pleasing textures seen in the foreground sand.
Regards, Tom
Very, very well done, Pat. Not a typical shot of the grasses. I like your use of the Cokin, attention to the lighting, and accurate use of focal point. My, your talent has developed and I have to revisit more often for creative inspiration.
Best regards,
Kathy
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