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A zmey: your notezmey::2007-11-08 6:44
hola, rolando!

i see how you have changed your note. fine work there. just wanted to point out that in my particular case the point of critique was not whether the photo itself (a portrait of a young woman) belongs here on TE, but rather the composition of it. the basic rule of portrait photography (and i myself leardned it the hard way not that long ago) is not to leave background objects protruding out of models' heads. your photo is a fine example of this. the rope's position directly behind the woman's head creates an illusion that she has been hanged. a weird illusion and i am not sure that is your intent (judging from your note). a simple solution would be to clone the rope out in photoshop.

cheers,
kristaps
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