Photographer’s Note
Spring has come early to Japan this year and these Plum Blossoms are an example of the beautiful flowers appearing all around my neighbourhood in Miyazaki.
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kajenn
(2325) 2004-03-02 21:21
Beautiful flowers and nice to see that we are approaching Spring. I love their colors and you've captured them well on their bare branches. But with that focus and short DOF I believe there's a need for some cropping. Either almost 1/3 from the top, as there are so much out of focus.
Or - perhaps better - along the middle of the white downpipe to the left, as it contradicts to the poetry of the picture. But if cut in half, it might look like some Japanese "thingy". (Then I'd like to take a bit from the right side too - for the composition).
You've done a good capture - I don't understand why you haven't got any comments, points or suggestions.
Ning
(359) 2005-01-12 21:45
I agree with Kajenn. You could have cropped the top half to make this photo more dramatic.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Peter Wells (Hikoke) (148)
- Genre: Lieux
- Medium: Couleur
- Date Taken: 2004-02-17
- Camera: SONY DSC-P92
- Exposition: f/2.8, 1/30 secondes
- Versions: version originale, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2004-03-01 6:21








