Critiques

CaptainJack (0) 2008-05-10 19:56

Hi Rommel, Like this perspective, makes it seems like I am walking up to his little stand. The inviting chair (maybe minus the bucket) is perfectly placed and aligned with your note too. The neon in the background gives a great sense of the atmosphere of this place too, just the right bokeh. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-21 21:43

Hi Zuma, Headed there this weekend! :) This side profile shot as he's leaning over to clean the table is well chosen. It really draws the eye to the surface of the table and the debris he is clearing away on the job. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-21 21:38

Hi Tamarin, Something about this scene intrigues me, must be the mystery I see and the lack of the note. ;) Not knowing anything about this part of the world, I am fascinated by the items surrounding the man, and his choice to wear a western suit jacket. Like the darker tones of the stone path that leads the eye along the alley. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-21 21:34

Hi Mark Wonderful "catcher-like" perspective here, showing us even the fat barrel of the "bat" in the follow through. It really shows the narrow alleys he had to hit at, along with his pals in the "field". Even has the watchful eyes from the famous figure on the poster, nice touch! Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-12 0:41

Hello Hisashi, just a brilliant image and placement of that well known building in this beautiful scene. The placement of the branches and scattered people on the ground just fills this whole image, leaving no wasted empty space. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-09 23:03

Hi Sonsoles, Wow, must be amazing to be in such a place and catch a sunset like that. I can just sense the relaxing mood of this place, especially with how you've captured that man closest in the foreground. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-09 23:00

Hello Angel, Impressive landscape, I especially like how you got the rock there and the shadow from it creates a natural path, with the water on the other side forming the other side of the ground. This leads up to those snowcapped peaks and great blue sky, to complete the scene. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-09 22:56

Hello Stelios, Very peaceful scene you have captured here, the dark blue hues and light coming off the boats are very beautiful. Nice placement of having them off to one side, while that light post in the background draws the eye to the other side as well. Jack

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-09 20:40

Hi Gregory, Great vantage point you had, really maxing out the range of that massive lens of yours. I kind of like we can still see the ball coming into the frame, perhaps just a split second before is vacuumed up in the first baseman's glove. I figure he was safe here. :)

CaptainJack (0) 2008-04-09 13:22

Hello Craig, The B&W conversion and overall gloomy feel really conveys the state of the structure and supports your note well. I like this rocky fence that draws your eye down to the building. Jack