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Great Clairedelune 2009-08-11 10:18

Battousai? The "Battousai" that I used to know in TE long time ago? :)))
Well... I'm not around myself most of the time, but a great pleasure to see that you are still alive!
Surely not your greatest photo, but I like the moment. It reminds me the time I used to smoke and drink (a long, long time ago! ;)). Somehow, I wish the glass was not there. It seems that it is there for no reason whatsoever. At least, if she was holding the glass with her left hand, or something, but now, it is more a hindrance than anything. Well, that being said, I like the pose she has. Cigarettes are so "likable" when you're young and beautiful... ;)
Not too sure about the second girl. I wish she would have some kind of link with the first woman, if she was looking at her for example. It will reinforce the story. Right now, I don't really know what to make of her, if you see what I mean.
Gosh... I lost the touch with how to make a critique! Help! :)
Have fun Pawel!
Claire

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Old 08-12-2009, 01:01 PM
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Default To papera: WS knocking at the door!

Hahaha! I will be weighted down by the Worshops today! Almost a log-jam here! Thank you for your contribution! I don't know exactly what is the definition of the "eversmile-effect". I guess that you probably know it better than me! Seeing your work on my image, I realise better its lack of sharpness. Have you seen the KLB-effect?!? I mean, her workshop?! It shows me that I could have make the colors come out much better as well and improve the frame a lot. I don't know why I even didn't try to work on it! Thanks a lot.
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