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Great avene 2011-02-06 15:58

I think this is great, the silhouette of the man on the camel against the beautiful gradient sky creates a nice minimalistic composition that works very well with the concept of solitude in the desert. I might have enhanced the minimaism by putting the rider closer to the left edge and leaving more empty space to the right, but that's a minor point. also, I think you can crop a little from the bottom, right now there's too much of that black area, and, as a result, the edge of the dune is close to the center line, which makes composition somewhat stacic, as opposed placing the main subject on the lines of the thirds. but, as I said, these are not major considerations. great shotm, wish it was mine :)


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Default To avene: well-aimed critiques

Good morning Kristine.

I thank for your well-aimed critiques.

Have a Good day!
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