CLODO 2011-11-23 1:42
Hi Eugene
I know you want to learn photography, so I am going to critique this post to give you some advice.
On my screen, the picture is not sharp. Then you had 3 children but 2 out of them are hidden, and the one who is looking at you is right in the middle of the picture. To try to enhance the shot (only the 3rd remark), you should cut the left part close to the pink cloth (uninteresting area).
Greetings
CLODO
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11-23-2011, 10:41 PM
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To boa: The cupcake...
Hello Boa,
These cupcakes are very pretty, but I didn't buy one. I have visited most of the big cupcake shops in NYC, and, in my opinion, this one has frosting that is too sugary.  The food court in Grand Central Terminal does, however, have great Italian gelato! I get some every time I am there.  Have a great day! Brenda 
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