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ben4321 2007-10-16 10:13
Beautiful light here Mateusz - the shot wouldn't have worked so well without those long shadows. Excluding the sky has worked well, allowing us to enjoy the landscape without distraction.
I find the framing a bit cramped on the right - that tree needs to be fully in-frame or out of it completely - but other than that your composition has a good balance to it.
Nice work.
Cheers,
Ben
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10-17-2007, 07:54 AM
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To ben4321: thank You
Dear Ben,
Thank You for such a 'first class' critique. Your remark about framing is very good one, i haven't seen it this way. Now i know i need to rearrange the composition one day. Thank You very much once again. And be well, Mat 
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