ben4321 2007-06-14 5:34
I like this shot Richard - it's a good portrait of this little girl, and you captured an appealing expression. Definitely a cut above the average cute kid shot.
I have a minor niggle with the centred framing though, and I think it might have worked better if you'd placed her more to the right edge of the frame. This would also have revealed more of the details of the street scene in the background.
Cheers,
Ben
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06-14-2007, 01:33 PM
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To ben4321: More of the scene...
Hi Ben,
Thanks for your constructive critique, very much appreciated as always. I agree with you, it would have been nice to see some more of the market to the left of the frame. Unfortunately though I didn't think about this at the time and the only cropping I did to this image post-process, was to the other side which consisted of cropping out a bit of arm and a bit more concrete! When composing this shot I obviously didn't think about the very tilted background either but I think I've just about got away with that as the girl is straight! Cheers, Rich 
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