mhoidal 2008-09-29 10:16
Hello Mike!
I like this one, especially because of the documentary feeling! This is very well kept through your choice of b&w.
I did a little workshop for you where I tried to keep centre of interest at the woman and the furnace in front. I think there might be to many point for the eyes to wander now, and to few to rest. Hope you like it.
Best regard, Merete
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10-08-2008, 12:43 AM
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To mhoidal: nice rework
Merete,
I like what you did. I will do a high resolution version like this some time. I liked the chaotic feel of so much background detail. However, when I saw your version I found you really brought out what was originally most important in the photo, the incense burner and the sweeping lady. Thanks for your new look. Mike 
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