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Great smarcell 2011-10-18 23:22

Dear Will,

I think this is a nice composition, and I like the repetition of lights and shadows broken by the dark human figure. As a suggestion, I would pay more attention in the slight tilt of the image (the columns are leaning) and, moreover, I would remove the very foreground on the right, that out-ofo-focus column that, in my opinion, is a bit disturbing the cleaness of the image.

Old 10-19-2011, 09:28 AM
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Ciao, Stefano)

We both like the picture but I like it for what you think are imperfections:

1) the tilt which adds dynamism to the scene
(otherwise it would be an image without any motion, though also good).

2)the column on the right is in good place and Will is right keeping it out of focus: it frames the picture; it doesn't really attract much attetntion.

In your comment I like that you mentioned the impact of the silhouette on the overall image. I thought about it but didn't find the right words.

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