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posternpete (203) 2009-12-09 6:46

Hi Vikram,
A good attempt, but perhaps the photo could have done with a little cropping. On the right and the bottom.
Whilst the gateway is good there is too much clutter in the darker street scene.
But good detial in that gate.
Pete

subhendu_bagchi (26091) 2009-12-10 3:07

Hi Vikram,
welcome to TE. Here you have presented a nice perspective with daily life activities. Great attempt. I enjoy your mode of composition but you did some mistakes here. Firstly the canvas is tilted clockwise. Light is not well balanced. I think the architecture is over exposed, and for this same frame the activity in road requires some light. I tried a workshop on it. Hope you do not mind and like it. Please see and let of know how it is. Anyway you have chosen a nice subject and your point of view is superb. Well done.
Have a nice evening.
Subhendu