Pokhra Lake, a photo from Gandaki, Ouest

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ilghiz (708) 2008-11-18 20:52

I see you are new here, but this picture is wonderful for a beginner! The play of colurs is a feast to the eye and the way you arranged the perspective is awesome! The scene step by step unfolds into infinity.

P.S. I would remove the head in the right bottom: it's a bit disturbing, though doesn't jump to the eye, just blending with the water.

PoorColdBoy (1127) 2008-11-18 20:55

I like the haphazard arrangement of the boats. It gives the scene an almost abstract feel. Also the figure in the boat in the lower left corner adds a lot to the composition. I'm not terribly fond of the head visible in the lower right, though.

macondo (20449) 2008-11-18 22:42

Hello Nilotpal.
A very tranquil scene, with wonderful gentle colours of the boats and hazy mountains behind. The photo has great sense of depth.
It is a pity about the woman's head in the bottom right corner - I wonder if you could clone it out. I think cropping it would spoil the balanced array of boats. Removing it would place more emphasis on the lone figure in the boat on the left, who is well placed in the composition.
Anyway, it's a nice shot. Well done.
Regards,
Andrew

toto (0) 2008-11-19 1:02

Bonjour,
belle photo de toutes ces barques , de cette dame dans l' une,bel aspect de votre prise, jolies couleurs et bonne netteté.
Bel effet ces montagnes lointaines dans cette brume.

Amitiés Thomas

sumanchak (646) 2008-11-19 7:03

Hi,
Wlcome to TE..
Tahole TE r bhut tomar ghareo chaplo...
Jak ekta dosor paoa galo..
Chabi ta khub bhalo hoyeche... ekta besh mayabi effect ache...
Great morning light & colours... sudhu right hand corner e meyeta na thakle aro bhalo hoto...
Cheers...
Take Care..
Suman Da

ElAprendiz (30) 2008-11-21 15:03

Hello my friend:

Beautiful composition, with some very attractive colors, although there are elements that distract: as part of the head that leans to the lower right side.

The depth of field is extraordinary.

John

jaywalker (16105) 2008-11-21 15:15

Hi Roy, A wonderful picture, I love the pastel colours & the scattering of the boats across the water, the soft backlight really shows the mountains beautifully, the person in the boat is perfect, I'm not as keen on the girls head, however overall brilliantly composed, kind regards Wilson.

ilDottore (5252) 2009-04-20 10:35

Hello,
I like perfect composition here.
Also the colours are very natural.
Congratulations!
Chris

Ninello52 (7576) 2009-04-20 13:54

Ciao Roy!
Bella prospettiva di barche colorate! Non so se si tratta di un fiume o del mare, il posto è comunque affascinante! Mi piacciono le barche "parcheggiate" in modo così disordinato, bello anche il paesaggio di montagne sul fondo.
Saluti, Nino.