Playing in the Window, a photo from Sancti Spiritus, Ouest

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Photographer's Note

I saw these kids playing in the window and thought it looked like a nice relaxing way to spend an afternoon.

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RGatward (20108) 2005-05-07 3:43

It's a nicely caught scene John, but I think you could have done more with the compo. The woman on the left doesn't really add to it, looking the way, and not connecting with the boys at all. I think beter to leave her out, and let the wall fill the frame. I also think the thirds convention wouldd have been best sticking to here, the leaving the boys central, and so small, leaves us out of touch with the rest of the frame. Spent out of smileys.