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vinicio (23423) 2006-09-20 3:56

Beautiful backlight and great atmosphere Grzegorz, compliments, the perspective and the composition agre great.
Ciao
Vinicio

gibas (135) 2006-09-20 4:09

Witaj.
Bardzo dobre zdjęcie. Klimatyczne - dzięki słońcu ten stalowy potwór wydaje się dziecięcą zabawką.
Pozdrawiam.
Marcin

luisafonso (862) 2006-09-20 4:51

Hi Grzegorz! I love trains and love train photos. So I was quickly grabbed by this picture of yours. The scene itself has a great potential and your search for the right picture is very thoughtful. But I really think you could have done a better job here. First the composition. The main subject must be the train, no doubt about it. But its placement in the frame doesn’t help the viewer to anchor the eyes on it. Even with the front lights on, my eyes keeping searching the picture for a place to rest. And your inclusion of the sun really doesn’t help. The bright sun, being so close to the upper right third, keeps on holding some preeminence here. And the sun is definitely *not* the leading actor here. The diagonal provided by the catenaries and railways are very good. The train is perspective looks also cool, but it’s your placement of it that doesn’t work. I tried to crop it, to place the train lights in the upper right third, but it just not worked. The sun and that black tree on the left need some space so you really had to compose it better in the first place. If you can go there again, please do it. Just try to put the headlights on the upper right third. This way, with the diagonal rails, the train has an immense path to run, giving the viewer a feeling of incredible depth. Concerning the light, I think it’s a bit underexposed. I know that to record the sun that way, you had to choose these exposure settings, but I would really go with a stop or two higher on the exposure time. Sorry for the long critique, but I do like your work. Just feel you can do it even better.

Andrzej_HHH (2480) 2006-09-21 13:29

Witam! Jak do tej pory najlepsze ujęcie tematu kolejowego na Twoim porfolio. Świetny klimat fotografii, dobre kolory, fajne linie utworzone przez tory i trakcje. Jedyne do czego można by się trochę przyczepić to zbyt ciemna dolna część fotografii ale i tak jest bardzo dobrze. Pozdrawiam. Andrzej

Fis2 (169589) 2007-01-18 13:57

Witam!
Widzę, że jesteś pasjonatem kolei. Podoba mi się jak połączyłeś pociąg ze wschodem Słońca.
Dobry kadr i fajna kolorystyka.
Pozdrawiam
Krzysztof