Brooklyn Bridge and a friend, a photo from New York, Northeast

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torben (3100) 2003-10-21 15:39

You've got stuff for a couple of nice picture here, but it doesn't work nicely together as one picture here.
The seagull on top of that - eh, thing - coulde be subject of a nice picture in itself, but the houses in the background are disturbing, and the relation between the - hmm, thing (I'd wish I knew what it was called in english) and bridge pylon as elements in the composition lacks tension.
It might be worth it trying to take a step or two to the right to separate the two shapes, and put them on a nice diagonal in the picture, and maybe even get some clear sky as background for the seagull.
Or take two pictures: one concentrated on the seagull (and the - thing - ), and another one focused on the bridge.

dannyc7 (358) 2003-10-22 20:53

I disagree...I think it is a good photo, since you successfully put in a nice perspective such opposites on the one hand, and managed to "persuade" the bird to pose for you in this noisy, hectic environment on the other.Congratulations on a nice photo,Liora and good luck on TE

Eagle (522) 2003-11-04 2:25

I like these "tourist shots" but with an animal in front of the target (see my gibraltar shots). Great composition! Maybe you could crop out some of the bottom though.

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patrick_belaire (363) 2004-03-02 7:16