FoRGoTTeN, a photo from California, Ouest

Photographer's Note

a simple picture i took on how busy life can be and how we forget some who may need help.

the picture says it all, don't need to comment much.

only adjustment i made was to convert it to b&w & cropped it.

please enjoy the picture, and i welcome all type of critism. thanks.

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VeeJayCee (2410) 2006-12-07 17:25

Good work Sani. I think the only suggestion I can make is to crop at the right side edge of the bus shelter to bring the forgotten person into more prominence.

zips (1958) 2006-12-08 4:04

Well this is San Francisco so this person could probably get some help somewhere if he wanted to....if he is of sound mind that is.

I think you are a bit far away, more details of the person would be helpful in conveying your message. Also, nobody is facing the camera here. An expression of a passerby would help get the point you are making a bit stronger perhaps.

But you noticed....so I hope you got involved.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

NIlma (20) 2010-09-02 2:33 [Comment]