Toronto

Photographer's Note

World's tallest freestanding structure. Toronto's pride.

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dragonslayero (3592) 2006-10-07 18:04

Hello Janos

Your intention for this shot is good, but I don't feel you have achieved it.

First of all, to narrow crop of the tower. The framing just makes the overall view so crowded and tight.
Also, what is it with all the grain?
Is this like a scanned negative of something, the grain is very obvious but I can also see soem dust.
Sorry, but this isn't quite up to max standards.

Odd Jarle

drm (486) 2006-10-12 14:05

I agree with Rew and Odd Jarle, Janos. The frame is too tight (so we can't assess the real size of the tower) and the bottom part is, well, a bit sloppy :)
Mario

rewshearer (682) 2006-11-08 1:31

Excellent choice of framing for this often-photographed icon, and good colour of sky, but I think your cloning work to reconstruct the lower portion of the tower didn't survive the operation. ;) Also some burnout at the upper reaches of the tower.
A beautiful idea but needs revisiting I suspect.
regards
Rew